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6102 pts ★ RacerOn 2022-07-09 at 01:00:44
Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
I'm not getting the meaning behind this
What else would you expect from him? It’s one of his most useful messages
Well, I guess I'll ignore that.
No read the finished message its useful like fr
This don't makes sense at all. I'd suggest you to quit this topic until you found how to write a sentence that's more worth it than the silence.
On 2022-07-09 at 00:59:00
Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
I'm not getting the meaning behind this
What else would you expect from him? It’s one of his most useful messages
Well, I guess I'll ignore that.
On 2022-07-09 at 00:56:55
Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
I'm not getting the meaning behind this
On 2022-07-09 at 00:54:13
I'm pausing it since I don't have any ideas si far.
On 2022-07-08 at 11:19:51
Here's some stuff to make you wait
They akll got free time until 6PM. At 6PM, the host asked them to talk. Host : So yeah, I learnt that apparently DarkShell cheated in the previous chapter : at the start of the round, he used a (weird ?) software to push all the boats faraway from the shore. However it only worked with the one of Osc-Omb and Hampter, so I'm giving them second place' points, along with VC and MysteryMan : so the team hampter & Osc-omb are now in 2nd place, with 14 points ! And I'm deleting the points of the Jeyboi team.
Toadboi : Look at what you've done !
DarkShell : And how would you learnt it ?
Host : There is a thing called cameras, stupid.
Hampter : So basically we got 14 points and we're so far at 2nd place ? Wow that's good.
Osc-Omb : Nice.
Hampter : And... What's the next challenge ?
Host : You'll see. I just needed to talk to you all about that. Now, do whatever you want.
Lely : For now I'm just going to sleep. I don't know why, but I feel like this night, I won't be able too. I know it sounds weird, but bye.
16Bits : What on Earth-
DarkShell : It's true that babies need to sleep a lot.
Max : Don't call him baby !
MysteryMan : Shut up DarkShell. And calm down Max-Bros.
Lely : *screams*
VC : What's up ?
Lely : I found a spider in my bed. And the spider is enormous ! It's not even cute. I'm not sleeping there !
Gamerlion : Calm down Lely. What-- Oh, yes, it's horrendous.
Lely : Do you guys want ice cream ?
Redshell : No thanks.
Gamerlion : Sorry, i don't like ice cream. *yet staring at the ice cream containers with shiny eyes*
Lely : Liar, I can see it in your eyes.
Gamerlion : I-I'm so sorry...
Can I have some ice cream though ?
Lely : Duh. No, sorry. You're a liar, I won't give you ice cream. LOL. Of course, you can have some. If I'm proposing ice cream--
Toadboi : You're proposing ice cream ?
Lely : Can you stop being a perv ?
Toadboi : Maybe the night will change us
Lely : Oh, nice song.
They akll got free time until 6PM. At 6PM, the host asked them to talk. Host : So yeah, I learnt that apparently DarkShell cheated in the previous chapter : at the start of the round, he used a (weird ?) software to push all the boats faraway from the shore. However it only worked with the one of Osc-Omb and Hampter, so I'm giving them second place' points, along with VC and MysteryMan : so the team hampter & Osc-omb are now in 2nd place, with 14 points ! And I'm deleting the points of the Jeyboi team.
Toadboi : Look at what you've done !
DarkShell : And how would you learnt it ?
Host : There is a thing called cameras, stupid.
Hampter : So basically we got 14 points and we're so far at 2nd place ? Wow that's good.
Osc-Omb : Nice.
Hampter : And... What's the next challenge ?
Host : You'll see. I just needed to talk to you all about that. Now, do whatever you want.
Lely : For now I'm just going to sleep. I don't know why, but I feel like this night, I won't be able too. I know it sounds weird, but bye.
16Bits : What on Earth-
DarkShell : It's true that babies need to sleep a lot.
Max : Don't call him baby !
MysteryMan : Shut up DarkShell. And calm down Max-Bros.
Lely : *screams*
VC : What's up ?
Lely : I found a spider in my bed. And the spider is enormous ! It's not even cute. I'm not sleeping there !
Gamerlion : Calm down Lely. What-- Oh, yes, it's horrendous.
Lely : Do you guys want ice cream ?
Redshell : No thanks.
Gamerlion : Sorry, i don't like ice cream. *yet staring at the ice cream containers with shiny eyes*
Lely : Liar, I can see it in your eyes.
Gamerlion : I-I'm so sorry...
Can I have some ice cream though ?Lely : Duh. No, sorry. You're a liar, I won't give you ice cream. LOL. Of course, you can have some. If I'm proposing ice cream--
Toadboi : You're proposing ice cream ?
Lely : Can you stop being a perv ?
Toadboi : Maybe the night will change us
Lely : Oh, nice song.
3On 2022-07-06 at 19:21:16
Alright people, so guess what I didn't have much ideas, but I'mma give you some hints about the next chapter... And I'mma reveal some things.
- the personnality revamp will be caused right in the night. At the start of the chapter, Toadboi will still be kinda dirty-minded, and the rest of the personnalities won't change as well.
- Hampter will have a lot of lines.
- the chapter will be during the night, and the chapter 3 will skip all the next day and the next night (people need to sleep)
- the personnality revamp will be caused right in the night. At the start of the chapter, Toadboi will still be kinda dirty-minded, and the rest of the personnalities won't change as well.
- Hampter will have a lot of lines.
- the chapter will be during the night, and the chapter 3 will skip all the next day and the next night (people need to sleep)
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1On 2022-07-03 at 20:48:08
Hampter : - pretend to be a genius but makes dumb choices
That’s just me going easy on people. If I made the right choices, then I would be finished way before everyone and have nothing for my (probably) ADHD mind to do
No you're not going easy on people lol. There is genius-er people that you here. (in the fanfic)
On 2022-07-03 at 20:19:50
Okay so since Toadboi's complaining about his character, while he want a weird personnality - I only agree to change a bit the personnality, but I won't make a personnality that could change the storyline too much. - So I decided to do a personnality revamp.
Lely : - obsessed by cute things
- likes to be friendly with others, but it end up sounding like he's flirty
- can be very very smart
- has a lot of faces that everybody want to discover
- happy guy but overreacts all the time
Max : - calm or lazy ?
- (un)funny jokes is what he likes to do
- very mature
- very friendly
DarkShell : - did he really evolved ?
- hates Lely
- more obsessed by softwares than Lely by cute things
- saying nonsense and senseful things in the same time
Toadboi : - not a perv anymore
- he often wants to kill other people
- going solo
- very annoying
Hampter : - pretend to be a genius but makes dumb choices
- NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP NEVER GONNA LET YOU DOWN
- cute and little bunny that scratches people everytime when he's annoyed... But they won't stop to hug him lol
- line distribution be like :
VC : - she don't talk anymore like he used to do
- hopes she's pretty
- not shining in any domain but good enough in every domain
MysteryMan : - genius
- not a lot of lines, but I can tell that's VERY LONG LINES
- kinda lazy but a nice person to everybuddy
Gamerlion : - he lies everytimes just to be polite but it end up making misunderstandings.
- very nice person. Though, he's being carried by his mate in scary situations.
Redshell : - very brave.
- kinda lazy but competent. Has potential but throws it out.
- likes to play
Osc-omb : - ...
Lely : - obsessed by cute things
- likes to be friendly with others, but it end up sounding like he's flirty
- can be very very smart
- has a lot of faces that everybody want to discover
- happy guy but overreacts all the time
Max : - calm or lazy ?
- (un)funny jokes is what he likes to do
- very mature
- very friendly
DarkShell : - did he really evolved ?
- hates Lely
- more obsessed by softwares than Lely by cute things
- saying nonsense and senseful things in the same time
Toadboi : - not a perv anymore
- he often wants to kill other people
- going solo
- very annoying
Hampter : - pretend to be a genius but makes dumb choices
- NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP NEVER GONNA LET YOU DOWN
- cute and little bunny that scratches people everytime when he's annoyed... But they won't stop to hug him lol
- line distribution be like :
VC : - she don't talk anymore like he used to do
- hopes she's pretty
- not shining in any domain but good enough in every domain
MysteryMan : - genius
- not a lot of lines, but I can tell that's VERY LONG LINES
- kinda lazy but a nice person to everybuddy
Gamerlion : - he lies everytimes just to be polite but it end up making misunderstandings.
- very nice person. Though, he's being carried by his mate in scary situations.
Redshell : - very brave.
- kinda lazy but competent. Has potential but throws it out.
- likes to play
Osc-omb : - ...
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1On 2022-07-03 at 18:37:48
Actually, you're becoming a solo person that hates teamwork, but for now, no assassin, and no healing factor.
My character not yours
But just get rid of my weird flirty crap
I said I would.
And this is MY fanfic not YOURS.
I know I have to respect your choices about your character, but that would change the storyline.
If you don't like, don't read.
2On 2022-07-03 at 13:19:10
Chapter 1B : I'mma just end the second round.
Host : Packs done ? If so the explosion's coming ! 3, 2, 1...
*enormous explosion* 💥
VC : Ouch, our boat is shaking more than Toadboi's bed. 😖
MysteryMan : Let's break the rooftop as fast as possible. 🤛 We have to make our way to the shoreline. 🏝️
Lely : Max, are you ready ?
Max : Yeah I'm all ready.
Lely : Kick the roof out please. You're Snorlax, you're strong. 💪
Meanwhile Hampter and Osc-omb are struggling to break the whole iron protection they just put.
Hampter : I'm a little bunny, I can't break iron. Please cause another explosion.
Osc-omb : Sadly I can't, I would die.
Hampter : Try to go right through the wall !
Lely : We just have 5 meters to swim.
Max : We won the second round !
MysteryMan : I told you that Koopa's shells go fast on the water. We are 2nd, VC. Congrats.
VC : Yay ! 🥳
DarkShell : Noooooo !!!! This software needed more time to be created ! The host's gonna hear about me ! 🤬
Toadboi : We're so far from the shore. We need to hurry...
DarkShell : Shut up ! 🤬
Host : And the team of Hampter & Osc-omb just made their way to the shore ! The team of Toadboi and DarkShell has lost the round !
Lemme skip the violent moments and images we got for like, one hour.
Host : It's 4PM, but you have free time. This evening we're gonna talk. See ya at 6PM, in the huts.
Max : Lely, what do you want to do ?
Lely : Going straight to the huts... And to our bedroom. I need to rest, I'm tired.
Max : I'm coming with you.
Lely : Nice ! 😊
At the huts...
Lely : Wanna take a snack ?
Note : The first day they shared a fridge but they have now personal little (cute, as Lely would say) fridges.
Max : I'm hungry so yes. I'm gonna take some ice cream.
Lely : Wanna share mine ? I saw you don't have much remain.
Max : Sure then, which flavor ?
Lely : You choose.
Max : I'm gonna pick this.
Lely : Ok. I'm gonna take some too.
At the beach...
Toadboi : DarkShell, do you wanna play some beach sports ?
DarkShell : Sure, as long as it's virtual.
Toadboi : Ok then play against the computer. 😒
Redshell : Gamerlion, we messed up the two rounds. What are we gonna do.
Gamerlion : We have to face it, don't stop being motivated and we will atleast win one. I'm sure about that.
Redshell : Well, I trust you, but... 😶
Hampter : We were about to lose...
Osc-omb : Chill mate. I'm pretty sure we're gonna handle it as cake.
The end.
The leaderboard (1st wins 10 and 5th wins 0. Which means 2nd win 8, 3rd win 6, but 4th win only 2.
So...
1. Lely-Bros : 20 points
2. VCMan : 10 points
3. Jeyboi : 8 points
3. CoolOmb2009 : 8 points
5. Gamered : 0 point
List of things I noticed :
- I wanted to make a friendship between Max and I since it's my best friend. However it will end up with everyone shipping us and the situation being cringey.
- Toadboi was created to be stupid, but he became perv somehow while I wasn't planning it. Though in this chapter, not really.
- the Line distribution is horrendous. It's basically MKPC Archipel - Lely and Max ft. DarkShell and Toadboi, Special thanks to Redshell and Gamerlion for their participation, uncredited lines by some members called as "CoolHampter2009", "Osc-Omb", "MysteryMan", "VC".
- the chapters' titles are so bad since I don't have any english ideas.
Host : Packs done ? If so the explosion's coming ! 3, 2, 1...
*enormous explosion* 💥
VC : Ouch, our boat is shaking more than Toadboi's bed. 😖
MysteryMan : Let's break the rooftop as fast as possible. 🤛 We have to make our way to the shoreline. 🏝️
Lely : Max, are you ready ?
Max : Yeah I'm all ready.
Lely : Kick the roof out please. You're Snorlax, you're strong. 💪
Meanwhile Hampter and Osc-omb are struggling to break the whole iron protection they just put.
Hampter : I'm a little bunny, I can't break iron. Please cause another explosion.
Osc-omb : Sadly I can't, I would die.
Hampter : Try to go right through the wall !
Lely : We just have 5 meters to swim.
Max : We won the second round !
MysteryMan : I told you that Koopa's shells go fast on the water. We are 2nd, VC. Congrats.
VC : Yay ! 🥳
DarkShell : Noooooo !!!! This software needed more time to be created ! The host's gonna hear about me ! 🤬
Toadboi : We're so far from the shore. We need to hurry...
DarkShell : Shut up ! 🤬
Host : And the team of Hampter & Osc-omb just made their way to the shore ! The team of Toadboi and DarkShell has lost the round !
Lemme skip the violent moments and images we got for like, one hour.
Host : It's 4PM, but you have free time. This evening we're gonna talk. See ya at 6PM, in the huts.
Max : Lely, what do you want to do ?
Lely : Going straight to the huts... And to our bedroom. I need to rest, I'm tired.
Max : I'm coming with you.
Lely : Nice ! 😊
At the huts...
Lely : Wanna take a snack ?
Note : The first day they shared a fridge but they have now personal little (cute, as Lely would say) fridges.
Max : I'm hungry so yes. I'm gonna take some ice cream.
Lely : Wanna share mine ? I saw you don't have much remain.
Max : Sure then, which flavor ?
Lely : You choose.
Max : I'm gonna pick this.
Lely : Ok. I'm gonna take some too.
At the beach...
Toadboi : DarkShell, do you wanna play some beach sports ?
DarkShell : Sure, as long as it's virtual.
Toadboi : Ok then play against the computer. 😒
Redshell : Gamerlion, we messed up the two rounds. What are we gonna do.
Gamerlion : We have to face it, don't stop being motivated and we will atleast win one. I'm sure about that.
Redshell : Well, I trust you, but... 😶
Hampter : We were about to lose...
Osc-omb : Chill mate. I'm pretty sure we're gonna handle it as cake.
The end.
The leaderboard (1st wins 10 and 5th wins 0. Which means 2nd win 8, 3rd win 6, but 4th win only 2.
So...
1. Lely-Bros : 20 points
2. VCMan : 10 points
3. Jeyboi : 8 points
3. CoolOmb2009 : 8 points
5. Gamered : 0 point
List of things I noticed :
- I wanted to make a friendship between Max and I since it's my best friend. However it will end up with everyone shipping us and the situation being cringey.
- Toadboi was created to be stupid, but he became perv somehow while I wasn't planning it. Though in this chapter, not really.
- the Line distribution is horrendous. It's basically MKPC Archipel - Lely and Max ft. DarkShell and Toadboi, Special thanks to Redshell and Gamerlion for their participation, uncredited lines by some members called as "CoolHampter2009", "Osc-Omb", "MysteryMan", "VC".
- the chapters' titles are so bad since I don't have any english ideas.
I’ve had a look at my 3 lines and the first 2 are accurate, but the last one sounds like I am demotivated which I normally wouldn’t be. Also I am NOT a quiet person. Having just 3 lines in the whole chapter definitely doesn’t fit me
You aren't demotivated, you're like : :|
Also yes, if I didn't give you much lines it's because you left, now that you're back I will not be lazy about your lines.
1On 2022-07-03 at 09:52:44
Actually, you're becoming a solo person that hates teamwork, but for now, no assassin, and no healing factor.
On 2022-07-02 at 19:49:21
Can I write a mini chapter (I’ll remove it if you hate it :/)
Chapter Who Cares: I Forgor ☠️
(Takes place after the twist of the shared rooms is revealed.)
Host: Share rooms together hah LOL +ratio and L
Ya Boi: Ew. That’s the gay part. Oh. Hello. Your probably wondering how I got into this hellhole. Well, their name rhymes with Helly. They even tried to saw off my balls! So… I pulled out my kniverinos. But, they still sacked me and some others onto this ghetto dump. And that’s it. It’s kinda… sus.
Max: I agree, this show be goofy ahh
Host: No one cares about you.
Max :
Ya Boi: Can I be with myself? I’m better of alone. Also it’s still goofy ahh.
Helly: No.
Darkshell: Uuuuuh YOU SUCK and I uh think you smell like ass, Toadboi.
Ya Boi: Oh come on! I wash my ass at least twice a week! Also, I refuse to take those seriously if they forget my triumphant “i”s. All five.
Osc-omb: Guys! Someone’s missing!
Lely: It’s CoolHampter, he left.
VC: Wait wait wait. We can just.. leave?
Host: No. he left before this began. The nine of you are still stuck.
Ya Boi: Wanna bet? (Pulls out the knives.)
16Bits: What is going on here?
Lely: I dont know. Some conflict about the shared rooms.
VC: Well, if we must..
Host: Yea. You do.
Ya Boi: You win, I guess. Well, who will- aaand everyone already paired up. Welp. Looks like I'm stuck with DarkShell. Wait, how is Hampter back?
Host: Cloner.
Osc-omb: Oh. That makes more sense.
Chapter Who Cares: I Forgor ☠️
(Takes place after the twist of the shared rooms is revealed.)
Host: Share rooms together hah LOL +ratio and L
Ya Boi: Ew. That’s the gay part. Oh. Hello. Your probably wondering how I got into this hellhole. Well, their name rhymes with Helly. They even tried to saw off my balls! So… I pulled out my kniverinos. But, they still sacked me and some others onto this ghetto dump. And that’s it. It’s kinda… sus.
Max: I agree, this show be goofy ahh
Host: No one cares about you.
Max :
Ya Boi: Can I be with myself? I’m better of alone. Also it’s still goofy ahh.
Helly: No.
Darkshell: Uuuuuh YOU SUCK and I uh think you smell like ass, Toadboi.
Ya Boi: Oh come on! I wash my ass at least twice a week! Also, I refuse to take those seriously if they forget my triumphant “i”s. All five.
Osc-omb: Guys! Someone’s missing!
Lely: It’s CoolHampter, he left.
VC: Wait wait wait. We can just.. leave?
Host: No. he left before this began. The nine of you are still stuck.
Ya Boi: Wanna bet? (Pulls out the knives.)
16Bits: What is going on here?
Lely: I dont know. Some conflict about the shared rooms.
VC: Well, if we must..
Host: Yea. You do.
Ya Boi: You win, I guess. Well, who will- aaand everyone already paired up. Welp. Looks like I'm stuck with DarkShell. Wait, how is Hampter back?
Host: Cloner.
Osc-omb: Oh. That makes more sense.
Well I was about to refuse anyways but sorry. This chapter is horrendous to me. It doesn't fit AT ALL. The perv side has to be implicit or else it'll be very cringe. The host shouldn't be rude. Some sentences are either stupid, either poorly wrote. "Ya boi" That's a no no. Plus you're adding completely random characters to the story. The issue with collaborative fanfics : if I let someone co-write the story, the story is gonna take a direction I don't want to be taken. The personnalities are off and random, they sounds like they're changing every sentence. So now...
THAT'S A NO NO
On 2022-07-02 at 15:38:10
more accurate personality
- brave
- competitive (not too competitive)
- somewhat childish
- competent
- lazy
- brave
- competitive (not too competitive)
- somewhat childish
- competent
- lazy
I'll try to.
1On 2022-07-02 at 11:32:04
Launching chapter
Host : Hello to you all. I'm glad to see people there, it's been long since I didn't have anyone to tortu*cough* play with !
Redshell : And what we doing there ?
VC : You accepted to come, bruh.
Redshell : Dude I just wanna know what we doing there.
VC : So shut up and let's listen to him.
Redshell : But what we doing there ?
VC : You stupid.
Host : So yeah, welcome to MKPC Archipel. That's a tropical island where you can eat a lot of exotic fruits and stuff... It has verdant forests and you can walk on beaches when sun is setting.
Max : ... but ?
Host : You'll be paired, yup. With whoever you want. You'll have to showdown sometimes. But you'll have free time too. So... Have a nice day finding your huts by yourself. They're pretty comfortable, but you'll have to sleep together--
Toadboi : 😏😏😏
Lely : That's absolutely disgusting. 😒
Max : Ew. I'm not sleeping with you Toadboi.
Arrived to the huts...
Max : Well they're simple but they looks so comfortable ! Look at this sofa !
😴...
DarkShell : I'm gonna take the biggest room, I need personal space.
Gamerlion : Please stop being savage. I wanna be friend with you... 🥺
DarkShell : Get outta my view ! 😤
Gamerlion : 😭
Lely : Hey ! Be nice to him or else ! 🤬
DarkShell : You wouldn't cause much damage, you're 11 years old, kidass. 😒
Lely : ⚒️😘
DarkShell : What could you do to me LMAO.
Lely : Ummm... Death, several injuries, aches, being in pain while moving... 🤔
MysteryMan : Guys please stop. Lely, please leave this rude ass be. DarkShell, frick off.
VC : Or else we're throwing your dark shell outta here and it will broke in a million pieces.
Osc-omb : Hey let's chill. It's 12AM. Wanna take a snack ? 😋
Toadboi : The only snack is me 😏😏😏
Hampter : Sorry but you're not even cute or anything. 😘
Toadboi : Shut up, I'm so hot. 🤤🥵
Max : Didn't knew he is forced to tell the opposite of what he is...
Toadboi : Roast me harder, daddy 😏
Lely : Stop it...
MysteryMan : They left 🍣 and some fried meat.
Lely : Lemme eat all the sushis or you'll become one 🤬
Max : Sure Lely.
Fways : Sushi shouldn't be edible lol
Lely : How is he here ? 😱
Everyone : Who ? 🧐
Lely : Guess I'm becoming crazier and crazier... 😐
MysteryMan : You eat whatever you want. They also put some veggie things, in case any of us would want to eat this.
VC : Anyways, do I look pretty ? 🤔
Max : Sort of.
Redshell : Yeah.
Gamerlion : Yes you really do. 🤩
VC : Awww, thanks. 🥰
DarkShell : No, you look 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Max : Stop it DarkShell ! That's not nice ! 😤
DarkShell : Come on I'm not a crybaby, I'm afraid of nothing. 😎
Hampter : Uh, why is there a spider on your shoulder ? 😖
DarkShell : Haaa ! 😰
Lely : AAAAAAAAEEEEEEE 😱😱😱😱😱
Max : It's enormous and it's... Horrendous. 😨
Osc-omb : Come on guys. Take a quick snack and let's go to the beach. Our host is certainly waiting us right there.
MysteryMan : Sure Baby Bomb. 🙂
Osc-omb : I'm not a baby ! 😑
Arrived to the beach...
Host : You like the place ?
Lely : Yeah, it feels like Gelato Beach.
Max : Anyways, what's the challenge ?
Host : That's simple. You see those wooden bars over the sea ?
Everybody : Yep. 🤔
Host : You'll have to stand there for the longest possible time. The last who falls is winning.
Max : And what do we win ?
Host : You'll see later. Now... See you later !
Everybody appeared on the bars. The challenge is starting.
After 2 hours...
MysteryMan : Aish, my arms are so tired. 😩
Max : Let's say I have another problem.
Lely : What's the problem Max ? 🙁
Max : Look, I have to go to the bathroom really bad. It's painful to stay here, while hearing the waves moving. 😖
Lely : Guess you'll have to hold it... 😕
Max : It's really hard though, it's pressuring on my abs, while I'm stucked on this freaking bar... 😑
Lely : Look, I also have to go to the bathroom... But we can't leave like this. And I'm not gonna lose this for a freaking stupid need.
Hours later...
Max : Lely, I feel like I'm dying by inside...😣
Lely : Me too but we're the two last. We just have to wait DarkShell to fall--
*DarkShell falling*
Max : Yay ! 😓
Host : Congrats to Max and Lely because they have won... Ah yeah, I forgot to mention : there is 2 winners per round. Now you're free, take a break !
*Max and Lely arguing on their way back home while walking fast*
Max : I was focused on this freaking stupid need during all the round so I think we did incredible, without realizing it.
Lely : But getting stucked on a bar was a bad experience. And let's say we weren't in the best settings to do this. Anyways Max, you okay with us pairing ? Because I have to admit, I like you...
Max : No, I was about to suggest it to you. ^^
Lely : Nice ! Thanks. 😁
Max : Anything for you to be happy. Wanna do something this evening ?
Lely : Nothing special, just spending time together. I don't feel in ease with the others, I don't know why. Oh look, there's a cute crab over here !
After a sunset stroll on the beach, and various activities, everybody got back to the camp.
During the dinner...
DarkShell : I and Toadboi decided to pair !
Lely : I'm gonna avoid this team as much as possible.
Max : I paired with Lely, he's very nice ! 😁
*Lely's blushing*
Redshell : I don't paired with anyone so far...
Hampter : I paired with Osc-omb, he's genius like me.
VC : And I paired with MysteryMan.
This evening, let's say they were having fun. It would be less fun tomorrow, but after all, let them have fun. It was a nice evening for everbuddy and the pairs slept together (so Redshell paired with Gamerlion). They're all sleeping and that's why I'm whispering. See you tomorrow... For the next chapter !
Yeah I did it.
That's done. I'm not respecting personnalities you gave, sorry.
Give a feedback please !
Host : Hello to you all. I'm glad to see people there, it's been long since I didn't have anyone to tortu*cough* play with !
Redshell : And what we doing there ?
VC : You accepted to come, bruh.
Redshell : Dude I just wanna know what we doing there.
VC : So shut up and let's listen to him.
Redshell : But what we doing there ?
VC : You stupid.
Host : So yeah, welcome to MKPC Archipel. That's a tropical island where you can eat a lot of exotic fruits and stuff... It has verdant forests and you can walk on beaches when sun is setting.
Max : ... but ?
Host : You'll be paired, yup. With whoever you want. You'll have to showdown sometimes. But you'll have free time too. So... Have a nice day finding your huts by yourself. They're pretty comfortable, but you'll have to sleep together--
Toadboi : 😏😏😏
Lely : That's absolutely disgusting. 😒
Max : Ew. I'm not sleeping with you Toadboi.
Arrived to the huts...
Max : Well they're simple but they looks so comfortable ! Look at this sofa !
😴...
DarkShell : I'm gonna take the biggest room, I need personal space.
Gamerlion : Please stop being savage. I wanna be friend with you... 🥺
DarkShell : Get outta my view ! 😤
Gamerlion : 😭
Lely : Hey ! Be nice to him or else ! 🤬
DarkShell : You wouldn't cause much damage, you're 11 years old, kidass. 😒
Lely : ⚒️😘
DarkShell : What could you do to me LMAO.
Lely : Ummm... Death, several injuries, aches, being in pain while moving... 🤔
MysteryMan : Guys please stop. Lely, please leave this rude ass be. DarkShell, frick off.
VC : Or else we're throwing your dark shell outta here and it will broke in a million pieces.
Osc-omb : Hey let's chill. It's 12AM. Wanna take a snack ? 😋
Toadboi : The only snack is me 😏😏😏
Hampter : Sorry but you're not even cute or anything. 😘
Toadboi : Shut up, I'm so hot. 🤤🥵
Max : Didn't knew he is forced to tell the opposite of what he is...
Toadboi : Roast me harder, daddy 😏
Lely : Stop it...
MysteryMan : They left 🍣 and some fried meat.
Lely : Lemme eat all the sushis or you'll become one 🤬
Max : Sure Lely.
Fways : Sushi shouldn't be edible lol
Lely : How is he here ? 😱
Everyone : Who ? 🧐
Lely : Guess I'm becoming crazier and crazier... 😐
MysteryMan : You eat whatever you want. They also put some veggie things, in case any of us would want to eat this.
VC : Anyways, do I look pretty ? 🤔
Max : Sort of.
Redshell : Yeah.
Gamerlion : Yes you really do. 🤩
VC : Awww, thanks. 🥰
DarkShell : No, you look 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Max : Stop it DarkShell ! That's not nice ! 😤
DarkShell : Come on I'm not a crybaby, I'm afraid of nothing. 😎
Hampter : Uh, why is there a spider on your shoulder ? 😖
DarkShell : Haaa ! 😰
Lely : AAAAAAAAEEEEEEE 😱😱😱😱😱
Max : It's enormous and it's... Horrendous. 😨
Osc-omb : Come on guys. Take a quick snack and let's go to the beach. Our host is certainly waiting us right there.
MysteryMan : Sure Baby Bomb. 🙂
Osc-omb : I'm not a baby ! 😑
Arrived to the beach...
Host : You like the place ?
Lely : Yeah, it feels like Gelato Beach.
Max : Anyways, what's the challenge ?
Host : That's simple. You see those wooden bars over the sea ?
Everybody : Yep. 🤔
Host : You'll have to stand there for the longest possible time. The last who falls is winning.
Max : And what do we win ?
Host : You'll see later. Now... See you later !
Everybody appeared on the bars. The challenge is starting.
After 2 hours...
MysteryMan : Aish, my arms are so tired. 😩
Max : Let's say I have another problem.
Lely : What's the problem Max ? 🙁
Max : Look, I have to go to the bathroom really bad. It's painful to stay here, while hearing the waves moving. 😖
Lely : Guess you'll have to hold it... 😕
Max : It's really hard though, it's pressuring on my abs, while I'm stucked on this freaking bar... 😑
Lely : Look, I also have to go to the bathroom... But we can't leave like this. And I'm not gonna lose this for a freaking stupid need.
Hours later...
Max : Lely, I feel like I'm dying by inside...😣
Lely : Me too but we're the two last. We just have to wait DarkShell to fall--
*DarkShell falling*
Max : Yay ! 😓
Host : Congrats to Max and Lely because they have won... Ah yeah, I forgot to mention : there is 2 winners per round. Now you're free, take a break !
*Max and Lely arguing on their way back home while walking fast*
Max : I was focused on this freaking stupid need during all the round so I think we did incredible, without realizing it.
Lely : But getting stucked on a bar was a bad experience. And let's say we weren't in the best settings to do this. Anyways Max, you okay with us pairing ? Because I have to admit, I like you...
Max : No, I was about to suggest it to you. ^^
Lely : Nice ! Thanks. 😁
Max : Anything for you to be happy. Wanna do something this evening ?
Lely : Nothing special, just spending time together. I don't feel in ease with the others, I don't know why. Oh look, there's a cute crab over here !
After a sunset stroll on the beach, and various activities, everybody got back to the camp.
During the dinner...
DarkShell : I and Toadboi decided to pair !
Lely : I'm gonna avoid this team as much as possible.
Max : I paired with Lely, he's very nice ! 😁
*Lely's blushing*
Redshell : I don't paired with anyone so far...
Hampter : I paired with Osc-omb, he's genius like me.
VC : And I paired with MysteryMan.
This evening, let's say they were having fun. It would be less fun tomorrow, but after all, let them have fun. It was a nice evening for everbuddy and the pairs slept together (so Redshell paired with Gamerlion). They're all sleeping and that's why I'm whispering. See you tomorrow... For the next chapter !
Yeah I did it.
That's done. I'm not respecting personnalities you gave, sorry.
Give a feedback please !
why is this so gay? besides like i said i dont care you hurt my feewings so idc also i dont care bout dat i just like saying stupid stuff
You're not necessarily gay. You're just a perv, flirting with everyone.
On 2022-07-01 at 23:07:49
Chapter 1B : I'mma just end the second round.
Host : Packs done ? If so the explosion's coming ! 3, 2, 1...
*enormous explosion* 💥
VC : Ouch, our boat is shaking more than Toadboi's bed. 😖
MysteryMan : Let's break the rooftop as fast as possible. 🤛 We have to make our way to the shoreline. 🏝️
Lely : Max, are you ready ?
Max : Yeah I'm all ready.
Lely : Kick the roof out please. You're Snorlax, you're strong. 💪
Meanwhile Hampter and Osc-omb are struggling to break the whole iron protection they just put.
Hampter : I'm a little bunny, I can't break iron. Please cause another explosion.
Osc-omb : Sadly I can't, I would die.
Hampter : Try to go right through the wall !
Lely : We just have 5 meters to swim.
Max : We won the second round !
MysteryMan : I told you that Koopa's shells go fast on the water. We are 2nd, VC. Congrats.
VC : Yay ! 🥳
DarkShell : Noooooo !!!! This software needed more time to be created ! The host's gonna hear about me ! 🤬
Toadboi : We're so far from the shore. We need to hurry...
DarkShell : Shut up ! 🤬
Host : And the team of Hampter & Osc-omb just made their way to the shore ! The team of Toadboi and DarkShell has lost the round !
Lemme skip the violent moments and images we got for like, one hour.
Host : It's 4PM, but you have free time. This evening we're gonna talk. See ya at 6PM, in the huts.
Max : Lely, what do you want to do ?
Lely : Going straight to the huts... And to our bedroom. I need to rest, I'm tired.
Max : I'm coming with you.
Lely : Nice ! 😊
At the huts...
Lely : Wanna take a snack ?
Note : The first day they shared a fridge but they have now personal little (cute, as Lely would say) fridges.
Max : I'm hungry so yes. I'm gonna take some ice cream.
Lely : Wanna share mine ? I saw you don't have much remain.
Max : Sure then, which flavor ?
Lely : You choose.
Max : I'm gonna pick this.
Lely : Ok. I'm gonna take some too.
At the beach...
Toadboi : DarkShell, do you wanna play some beach sports ?
DarkShell : Sure, as long as it's virtual.
Toadboi : Ok then play against the computer. 😒
Redshell : Gamerlion, we messed up the two rounds. What are we gonna do.
Gamerlion : We have to face it, don't stop being motivated and we will atleast win one. I'm sure about that.
Redshell : Well, I trust you, but... 😶
Hampter : We were about to lose...
Osc-omb : Chill mate. I'm pretty sure we're gonna handle it as cake.
The end.
The leaderboard (1st wins 10 and 5th wins 0. Which means 2nd win 8, 3rd win 6, but 4th win only 2.
So...
1. Lely-Bros : 20 points
2. VCMan : 10 points
3. Jeyboi : 8 points
3. CoolOmb2009 : 8 points
5. Gamered : 0 point
List of things I noticed :
- I wanted to make a friendship between Max and I since it's my best friend. However it will end up with everyone shipping us and the situation being cringey.
- Toadboi was created to be stupid, but he became perv somehow while I wasn't planning it. Though in this chapter, not really.
- the Line distribution is horrendous. It's basically MKPC Archipel - Lely and Max ft. DarkShell and Toadboi, Special thanks to Redshell and Gamerlion for their participation, uncredited lines by some members called as "CoolHampter2009", "Osc-Omb", "MysteryMan", "VC".
- the chapters' titles are so bad since I don't have any english ideas.
Host : Packs done ? If so the explosion's coming ! 3, 2, 1...
*enormous explosion* 💥
VC : Ouch, our boat is shaking more than Toadboi's bed. 😖
MysteryMan : Let's break the rooftop as fast as possible. 🤛 We have to make our way to the shoreline. 🏝️
Lely : Max, are you ready ?
Max : Yeah I'm all ready.
Lely : Kick the roof out please. You're Snorlax, you're strong. 💪
Meanwhile Hampter and Osc-omb are struggling to break the whole iron protection they just put.
Hampter : I'm a little bunny, I can't break iron. Please cause another explosion.
Osc-omb : Sadly I can't, I would die.
Hampter : Try to go right through the wall !
Lely : We just have 5 meters to swim.
Max : We won the second round !
MysteryMan : I told you that Koopa's shells go fast on the water. We are 2nd, VC. Congrats.
VC : Yay ! 🥳
DarkShell : Noooooo !!!! This software needed more time to be created ! The host's gonna hear about me ! 🤬
Toadboi : We're so far from the shore. We need to hurry...
DarkShell : Shut up ! 🤬
Host : And the team of Hampter & Osc-omb just made their way to the shore ! The team of Toadboi and DarkShell has lost the round !
Lemme skip the violent moments and images we got for like, one hour.
Host : It's 4PM, but you have free time. This evening we're gonna talk. See ya at 6PM, in the huts.
Max : Lely, what do you want to do ?
Lely : Going straight to the huts... And to our bedroom. I need to rest, I'm tired.
Max : I'm coming with you.
Lely : Nice ! 😊
At the huts...
Lely : Wanna take a snack ?
Note : The first day they shared a fridge but they have now personal little (cute, as Lely would say) fridges.
Max : I'm hungry so yes. I'm gonna take some ice cream.
Lely : Wanna share mine ? I saw you don't have much remain.
Max : Sure then, which flavor ?
Lely : You choose.
Max : I'm gonna pick this.
Lely : Ok. I'm gonna take some too.
At the beach...
Toadboi : DarkShell, do you wanna play some beach sports ?
DarkShell : Sure, as long as it's virtual.
Toadboi : Ok then play against the computer. 😒
Redshell : Gamerlion, we messed up the two rounds. What are we gonna do.
Gamerlion : We have to face it, don't stop being motivated and we will atleast win one. I'm sure about that.
Redshell : Well, I trust you, but... 😶
Hampter : We were about to lose...
Osc-omb : Chill mate. I'm pretty sure we're gonna handle it as cake.
The end.
The leaderboard (1st wins 10 and 5th wins 0. Which means 2nd win 8, 3rd win 6, but 4th win only 2.
So...
1. Lely-Bros : 20 points
2. VCMan : 10 points
3. Jeyboi : 8 points
3. CoolOmb2009 : 8 points
5. Gamered : 0 point
List of things I noticed :
- I wanted to make a friendship between Max and I since it's my best friend. However it will end up with everyone shipping us and the situation being cringey.
- Toadboi was created to be stupid, but he became perv somehow while I wasn't planning it. Though in this chapter, not really.
- the Line distribution is horrendous. It's basically MKPC Archipel - Lely and Max ft. DarkShell and Toadboi, Special thanks to Redshell and Gamerlion for their participation, uncredited lines by some members called as "CoolHampter2009", "Osc-Omb", "MysteryMan", "VC".
- the chapters' titles are so bad since I don't have any english ideas.
22On 2022-07-01 at 18:41:56
very very nice so far! kinda lost, though. maybe because we only have the names to go off of when imagining these scenarios... maybe give each pair a colour?
That's why I wanted at first. Sadly, when I wrote stories about Mario, it was kinda obvious which color goes to who. (Mario is RED due to his suit, Peach is PINK due to her personnality and suit, Yoshi is GREEN due to his skin, Max and Yascamer were BLUE as forum members, and Gamerlion was WHITE because he asked for it.) But I don't really know how to give a color to each pair.Any ideas ? Let me know
J'ai réfléchi, et je n'ai pas trouvé d'idée (cé fo)
Oh, because I was teal in my old fanfic ?
Also, that could be a great idea, since I always write and green, otherwise you said you love blue ? Teal is between Green and Blue, that would indeed be fair, yup.
If I had to give colors :
Lely and Max
MysteryMan and VC
Hampter and Osc-Omb
Redshell and Gamerlion
DarkShell and Toadboi
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1On 2022-07-01 at 18:34:34
very very nice so far! kinda lost, though. maybe because we only have the names to go off of when imagining these scenarios... maybe give each pair a colour?
That's why I wanted at first. Sadly, when I wrote stories about Mario, it was kinda obvious which color goes to who. (Mario is RED due to his suit, Peach is PINK due to her personnality and suit, Yoshi is GREEN due to his skin, Max and Yascamer were BLUE as forum members, and Gamerlion was WHITE because he asked for it.) But I don't really know how to give a color to each pair.Any ideas ? Let me know
On 2022-07-01 at 10:43:08
Chapter 1 : Over the blue sea
Host : Wake up y'all !
DarkShell : Shut up you dumbass. We're still sleeping.
Lely : Stop being rude with even the host !
Max : 🥱 Let's check the clock before saying anything.
VC : Bruh it's 4AM.
Host : But the sun is already kinda rising. The sky is red-ish ! So whatever about your stupid clocks.
Toadboi : So DarkShell, was it shaky this night ? 😏
DarkShell : You freaking pervy, I'm not sleeping with you anymore ! You tried to--- 🤢
Lely and Max : We don't need more details...
VC : Well done DarkShell. You took what you deserved. 😂
DarkShell : Shut up you stupid !
Lely : Shut up you rude ass or I'm kicking outta here !
DarkShell : Bring it on !
MysteryMan (waking up) : What's going on-- Oh whatever, I'm going back to sleep.
Host : Today's not gonna be a creamy cake. You'll have to survive in your personal boat for 5 hours. 
At the end of the round, you have to escape the boat while it's exploding. 
Your boat is very little but you can customize it before the round. 
You're gonna be in pairs, of course. 
DarkShell : There's no way I'm with him !
Host : Shut up you stupid. You choosed him, you choosed him. It was your pure wish.
So basically this round will be :
Max & Lely VS MysteryMan & VC VS DarkShell & Toadboi VS Hampter & Osc-omb VS Redshell & Gamerlion.
Everyone : Let's go !
At the beach...
Host : Do whatever with your boats.
DarkShell : It's gonna be mine ! You won't make any choices !
Max : I don't want much, let's just put some food, some games and some time killers.
Lely : Exact.
15 minutes later...
*Toadboi and DarkShell in a fight to make their boat*
*MysteryMan and VC doing nothing*
*Hampter and Osc-omb planning a boat that could be more practical than others*
*Lely and Max finished their boat a few seconds ago and they are making their boat more powering.*
*Redshell and Gamerlion doing a comfortable boat*
Lely : I think we should let the boat like this.
Max : Why ? It's gonna explode !
Lely : And what if we're stucked under things while it's exploding ? (whispering because he don't want the others to hear) 🤔
Max : Oh yes ! I didn't think to this...
Toadboi : We're gonna put drips everywhere !
DarkShell : I'mma take a computer to make softwares.
Toadboi : Bruh are you stupid ! What if when it's exploding, you're more interested about your software ?
DarkShell : We'll lose but my business is more important.
Toadboi : No.
VC : I don't know what we should put in this boat.
MysteryMan : Do you want the boat to be cute ? Because I don't care.
VC : Oh, yes ! I would be happy if so !
Lely : Someone called me ?
MysteryMan : No one called you.
Lely : .
VC : Let's put some cute things in the boat ! (excited)
MysteryMan : Shut up, Lely's obsessed with cute things.
VC : Ok I'll whisper.
Redshell : Let's put a sofa here !
Gamerlion : Let's put a TV !
Lely : But the boat is so little bruh ; it has the size of a little bedroom in a caravan. 😂 A sofa and a TV won't fit in.
The round starts !
Redshell : We're gonna have a nice time here !
Gamerlion : Yeah sure !
Redshell : Why do I feel we're sinking ?
Gamerlion : Oh my gosh, there is water entering the boat ! 😱
Host communicating through a mic : You put too much heavy thing in a little boat. You're gonna drown.
Gamerlion : AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT THE FUCK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Redshell : Oh my god, we're gonna die...
Gamerlion : We have to give up ! Search a button or anything ! The boat is comfortable and strong since we made it like that ! We can't exit !
Host : There is a white flag somewhere. I forgot where the button is.
Gamerlion : Help us !
Max : I feel bad for them...
Lely : I'm gonna save them. If you're in the boat we're not eliminated and I can get back.
Max : Your idea of not blocking the exit was great !
Lely : 😊 Thanks. Now I'm gonna help them.
Redshell : I don't wanna die... 😭😭😭
Lely : *stomping on the boat*
Gamerlion : WHATS HAPPENING WE HIT A ROCK ?
Redshell : It sounded like someone stomping...
Lely : *breaks in* Take my hand and let's get outta here !
Gamerlion : YES YES OH MY GOSH SAVE US !!!
Lely : Here you go, come to the beach.
The three persons got back to the beach.
Gamerlion : Thanks... 😭😭😭 SO MUCH !
Redshell : We're accountable for life !
Lely : I'm not gonna let anyone die. Now I'm going bck to my boat. See ya !
Max : Oh you're back ?
Lely : Yes. I "saved" them.
Max : You're a hero !
Lely : No, I just acted as a normal human. Saving people in danger sounds normal to me. I would even save DarkShell.
Max : Now let's play a game together !
Lely : I brought a computer so we can play MKPC ; I also setted a counter. When the counter reaches 5 minutes left, we're packing our bags and we got ready to get out of the boat.
Max : We can also take a snack.
Lely : Let's do it.
Max and Lely were enjoying this time. Meanwhile...
Toadboi : ASSHOLE !
Host : Wassup ?
Toadboi : DarkShell was just angry at me because I interrupted his software creation ! And he kicked me out !
Host : ...
VC and MysteryMan : *sleeping*
5 minutes before the explosion...
Lely : Let's pack our bags !
Max : Sure.
DarkShell : I need 15 minutes to finish this software. I hope we have it.
Hampter : Let's pack our bags.
Host : Ah and yes the winner team is the one who reaches the shore the first !
To be continued...
Host : Wake up y'all !
DarkShell : Shut up you dumbass. We're still sleeping.
Lely : Stop being rude with even the host !
Max : 🥱 Let's check the clock before saying anything.
VC : Bruh it's 4AM.
Host : But the sun is already kinda rising. The sky is red-ish ! So whatever about your stupid clocks.
Toadboi : So DarkShell, was it shaky this night ? 😏
DarkShell : You freaking pervy, I'm not sleeping with you anymore ! You tried to--- 🤢
Lely and Max : We don't need more details...
VC : Well done DarkShell. You took what you deserved. 😂
DarkShell : Shut up you stupid !
Lely : Shut up you rude ass or I'm kicking outta here !
DarkShell : Bring it on !
MysteryMan (waking up) : What's going on-- Oh whatever, I'm going back to sleep.
Host : Today's not gonna be a creamy cake.
You'll have to survive in your personal boat for 5 hours. At the end of the round, you have to escape the boat while it's exploding. Your boat is very little but you can customize it before the round. You're gonna be in pairs, of course. DarkShell : There's no way I'm with him !
Host : Shut up you stupid. You choosed him, you choosed him. It was your pure wish.
So basically this round will be :
Max & Lely VS MysteryMan & VC VS DarkShell & Toadboi VS Hampter & Osc-omb VS Redshell & Gamerlion.
Everyone : Let's go !
At the beach...
Host : Do whatever with your boats.
DarkShell : It's gonna be mine ! You won't make any choices !
Max : I don't want much, let's just put some food, some games and some time killers.
Lely : Exact.
15 minutes later...
*Toadboi and DarkShell in a fight to make their boat*
*MysteryMan and VC doing nothing*
*Hampter and Osc-omb planning a boat that could be more practical than others*
*Lely and Max finished their boat a few seconds ago and they are making their boat more powering.*
*Redshell and Gamerlion doing a comfortable boat*
Lely : I think we should let the boat like this.
Max : Why ? It's gonna explode !
Lely : And what if we're stucked under things while it's exploding ? (whispering because he don't want the others to hear) 🤔
Max : Oh yes ! I didn't think to this...
Toadboi : We're gonna put drips everywhere !
DarkShell : I'mma take a computer to make softwares.
Toadboi : Bruh are you stupid ! What if when it's exploding, you're more interested about your software ?
DarkShell : We'll lose but my business is more important.
Toadboi : No.
VC : I don't know what we should put in this boat.
MysteryMan : Do you want the boat to be cute ? Because I don't care.
VC : Oh, yes ! I would be happy if so !
Lely : Someone called me ?
MysteryMan : No one called you.
Lely : .
VC : Let's put some cute things in the boat !
(excited)MysteryMan : Shut up, Lely's obsessed with cute things.
VC : Ok I'll whisper.
Redshell : Let's put a sofa here !
Gamerlion : Let's put a TV !
Lely : But the boat is so little bruh ; it has the size of a little bedroom in a caravan. 😂 A sofa and a TV won't fit in.
The round starts !
Redshell : We're gonna have a nice time here !
Gamerlion : Yeah sure !
Redshell : Why do I feel we're sinking ?
Gamerlion : Oh my gosh, there is water entering the boat ! 😱
Host communicating through a mic : You put too much heavy thing in a little boat. You're gonna drown.
Gamerlion : AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT THE FUCK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Redshell : Oh my god, we're gonna die...
Gamerlion : We have to give up ! Search a button or anything ! The boat is comfortable and strong since we made it like that ! We can't exit !
Host : There is a white flag somewhere. I forgot where the button is.
Gamerlion : Help us !
Max : I feel bad for them...
Lely : I'm gonna save them. If you're in the boat we're not eliminated and I can get back.
Max : Your idea of not blocking the exit was great !
Lely : 😊 Thanks. Now I'm gonna help them.
Redshell : I don't wanna die... 😭😭😭
Lely : *stomping on the boat*
Gamerlion : WHATS HAPPENING WE HIT A ROCK ?
Redshell : It sounded like someone stomping...
Lely : *breaks in* Take my hand and let's get outta here !
Gamerlion : YES YES OH MY GOSH SAVE US !!!
Lely : Here you go, come to the beach.
The three persons got back to the beach.
Gamerlion : Thanks... 😭😭😭 SO MUCH !
Redshell : We're accountable for life !
Lely : I'm not gonna let anyone die. Now I'm going bck to my boat. See ya !
Max : Oh you're back ?
Lely : Yes. I "saved" them.
Max : You're a hero !
Lely : No, I just acted as a normal human. Saving people in danger sounds normal to me. I would even save DarkShell.
Max : Now let's play a game together !
Lely : I brought a computer so we can play MKPC ; I also setted a counter. When the counter reaches 5 minutes left, we're packing our bags and we got ready to get out of the boat.
Max : We can also take a snack.
Lely : Let's do it.
Max and Lely were enjoying this time. Meanwhile...
Toadboi : ASSHOLE !
Host : Wassup ?
Toadboi : DarkShell was just angry at me because I interrupted his software creation ! And he kicked me out !
Host : ...
VC and MysteryMan : *sleeping*
5 minutes before the explosion...
Lely : Let's pack our bags !
Max : Sure.
DarkShell : I need 15 minutes to finish this software. I hope we have it.
Hampter : Let's pack our bags.
Host : Ah and yes the winner team is the one who reaches the shore the first !
To be continued...
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1On 2022-07-01 at 08:03:48
I forgot to mention :
- there's 97% of chance I'm publishing the first chapter today
- english is not my first language so please report errors but don't mock me please
- there's 97% of chance I'm publishing the first chapter today
- english is not my first language so please report errors but don't mock me please
1On 2022-07-01 at 00:19:06
Launching chapter
Host : Hello to you all. I'm glad to see people there, it's been long since I didn't have anyone to tortu*cough* play with !
Redshell : And what we doing there ?
VC : You accepted to come, bruh.
Redshell : Dude I just wanna know what we doing there.
VC : So shut up and let's listen to him.
Redshell : But what we doing there ?
VC : You stupid.
Host : So yeah, welcome to MKPC Archipel. That's a tropical island where you can eat a lot of exotic fruits and stuff... It has verdant forests and you can walk on beaches when sun is setting.
Max : ... but ?
Host : You'll be paired, yup. With whoever you want. You'll have to showdown sometimes. But you'll have free time too. So... Have a nice day finding your huts by yourself. They're pretty comfortable, but you'll have to sleep together--
Toadboi : 😏😏😏
Lely : That's absolutely disgusting. 😒
Max : Ew. I'm not sleeping with you Toadboi.
Arrived to the huts...
Max : Well they're simple but they looks so comfortable ! Look at this sofa !
😴...
DarkShell : I'm gonna take the biggest room, I need personal space.
Gamerlion : Please stop being savage. I wanna be friend with you... 🥺
DarkShell : Get outta my view ! 😤
Gamerlion : 😭
Lely : Hey ! Be nice to him or else ! 🤬
DarkShell : You wouldn't cause much damage, you're 11 years old, kidass. 😒
Lely : ⚒️😘
DarkShell : What could you do to me LMAO.
Lely : Ummm... Death, several injuries, aches, being in pain while moving... 🤔
MysteryMan : Guys please stop. Lely, please leave this rude ass be. DarkShell, frick off.
VC : Or else we're throwing your dark shell outta here and it will broke in a million pieces.
Osc-omb : Hey let's chill. It's 12AM. Wanna take a snack ? 😋
Toadboi : The only snack is me 😏😏😏
Hampter : Sorry but you're not even cute or anything. 😘
Toadboi : Shut up, I'm so hot. 🤤🥵
Max : Didn't knew he is forced to tell the opposite of what he is...
Toadboi : Roast me harder, daddy 😏
Lely : Stop it...
MysteryMan : They left 🍣 and some fried meat.
Lely : Lemme eat all the sushis or you'll become one 🤬
Max : Sure Lely.
Fways : Sushi shouldn't be edible lol
Lely : How is he here ? 😱
Everyone : Who ? 🧐
Lely : Guess I'm becoming crazier and crazier... 😐
MysteryMan : You eat whatever you want. They also put some veggie things, in case any of us would want to eat this.
VC : Anyways, do I look pretty ? 🤔
Max : Sort of.
Redshell : Yeah.
Gamerlion : Yes you really do. 🤩
VC : Awww, thanks. 🥰
DarkShell : No, you look 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Max : Stop it DarkShell ! That's not nice ! 😤
DarkShell : Come on I'm not a crybaby, I'm afraid of nothing. 😎
Hampter : Uh, why is there a spider on your shoulder ? 😖
DarkShell : Haaa ! 😰
Lely : AAAAAAAAEEEEEEE 😱😱😱😱😱
Max : It's enormous and it's... Horrendous. 😨
Osc-omb : Come on guys. Take a quick snack and let's go to the beach. Our host is certainly waiting us right there.
MysteryMan : Sure Baby Bomb. 🙂
Osc-omb : I'm not a baby ! 😑
Arrived to the beach...
Host : You like the place ?
Lely : Yeah, it feels like Gelato Beach.
Max : Anyways, what's the challenge ?
Host : That's simple. You see those wooden bars over the sea ?
Everybody : Yep. 🤔
Host : You'll have to stand there for the longest possible time. The last who falls is winning.
Max : And what do we win ?
Host : You'll see later. Now... See you later !
Everybody appeared on the bars. The challenge is starting.
After 2 hours...
MysteryMan : Aish, my arms are so tired. 😩
Max : Let's say I have another problem.
Lely : What's the problem Max ? 🙁
Max : Look, I have to go to the bathroom really bad. It's painful to stay here, while hearing the waves moving. 😖
Lely : Guess you'll have to hold it... 😕
Max : It's really hard though, it's pressuring on my abs, while I'm stucked on this freaking bar... 😑
Lely : Look, I also have to go to the bathroom... But we can't leave like this. And I'm not gonna lose this for a freaking stupid need.
Hours later...
Max : Lely, I feel like I'm dying by inside...😣
Lely : Me too but we're the two last. We just have to wait DarkShell to fall--
*DarkShell falling*
Max : Yay ! 😓
Host : Congrats to Max and Lely because they have won... Ah yeah, I forgot to mention : there is 2 winners per round. Now you're free, take a break !
*Max and Lely arguing on their way back home while walking fast*
Max : I was focused on this freaking stupid need during all the round so I think we did incredible, without realizing it.
Lely : But getting stucked on a bar was a bad experience. And let's say we weren't in the best settings to do this. Anyways Max, you okay with us pairing ? Because I have to admit, I like you...
Max : No, I was about to suggest it to you. ^^
Lely : Nice ! Thanks. 😁
Max : Anything for you to be happy. Wanna do something this evening ?
Lely : Nothing special, just spending time together. I don't feel in ease with the others, I don't know why. Oh look, there's a cute crab over here !
After a sunset stroll on the beach, and various activities, everybody got back to the camp.
During the dinner...
DarkShell : I and Toadboi decided to pair !
Lely : I'm gonna avoid this team as much as possible.
Max : I paired with Lely, he's very nice ! 😁
*Lely's blushing*
Redshell : I don't paired with anyone so far...
Hampter : I paired with Osc-omb, he's genius like me.
VC : And I paired with MysteryMan.
This evening, let's say they were having fun. It would be less fun tomorrow, but after all, let them have fun. It was a nice evening for everbuddy and the pairs slept together (so Redshell paired with Gamerlion). They're all sleeping and that's why I'm whispering. See you tomorrow... For the next chapter !
Yeah I did it.
That's done. I'm not respecting personnalities you gave, sorry.
Give a feedback please !
Host : Hello to you all. I'm glad to see people there, it's been long since I didn't have anyone to tortu*cough* play with !
Redshell : And what we doing there ?
VC : You accepted to come, bruh.
Redshell : Dude I just wanna know what we doing there.
VC : So shut up and let's listen to him.
Redshell : But what we doing there ?
VC : You stupid.
Host : So yeah, welcome to MKPC Archipel. That's a tropical island where you can eat a lot of exotic fruits and stuff... It has verdant forests and you can walk on beaches when sun is setting.
Max : ... but ?
Host : You'll be paired, yup. With whoever you want. You'll have to showdown sometimes. But you'll have free time too. So... Have a nice day finding your huts by yourself. They're pretty comfortable, but you'll have to sleep together--
Toadboi : 😏😏😏
Lely : That's absolutely disgusting. 😒
Max : Ew. I'm not sleeping with you Toadboi.
Arrived to the huts...
Max : Well they're simple but they looks so comfortable ! Look at this sofa !
😴...
DarkShell : I'm gonna take the biggest room, I need personal space.
Gamerlion : Please stop being savage. I wanna be friend with you... 🥺
DarkShell : Get outta my view ! 😤
Gamerlion : 😭
Lely : Hey ! Be nice to him or else ! 🤬
DarkShell : You wouldn't cause much damage, you're 11 years old, kidass. 😒
Lely : ⚒️😘
DarkShell : What could you do to me LMAO.
Lely : Ummm... Death, several injuries, aches, being in pain while moving... 🤔
MysteryMan : Guys please stop. Lely, please leave this rude ass be. DarkShell, frick off.
VC : Or else we're throwing your dark shell outta here and it will broke in a million pieces.
Osc-omb : Hey let's chill. It's 12AM. Wanna take a snack ? 😋
Toadboi : The only snack is me 😏😏😏
Hampter : Sorry but you're not even cute or anything. 😘
Toadboi : Shut up, I'm so hot. 🤤🥵
Max : Didn't knew he is forced to tell the opposite of what he is...
Toadboi : Roast me harder, daddy 😏
Lely : Stop it...
MysteryMan : They left 🍣 and some fried meat.
Lely : Lemme eat all the sushis or you'll become one 🤬
Max : Sure Lely.
Fways : Sushi shouldn't be edible lol
Lely : How is he here ? 😱
Everyone : Who ? 🧐
Lely : Guess I'm becoming crazier and crazier... 😐
MysteryMan : You eat whatever you want. They also put some veggie things, in case any of us would want to eat this.
VC : Anyways, do I look pretty ? 🤔
Max : Sort of.
Redshell : Yeah.
Gamerlion : Yes you really do. 🤩
VC : Awww, thanks. 🥰
DarkShell : No, you look 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Max : Stop it DarkShell ! That's not nice ! 😤
DarkShell : Come on I'm not a crybaby, I'm afraid of nothing. 😎
Hampter : Uh, why is there a spider on your shoulder ? 😖
DarkShell : Haaa ! 😰
Lely : AAAAAAAAEEEEEEE 😱😱😱😱😱
Max : It's enormous and it's... Horrendous. 😨
Osc-omb : Come on guys. Take a quick snack and let's go to the beach. Our host is certainly waiting us right there.
MysteryMan : Sure Baby Bomb. 🙂
Osc-omb : I'm not a baby ! 😑
Arrived to the beach...
Host : You like the place ?
Lely : Yeah, it feels like Gelato Beach.
Max : Anyways, what's the challenge ?
Host : That's simple. You see those wooden bars over the sea ?
Everybody : Yep. 🤔
Host : You'll have to stand there for the longest possible time. The last who falls is winning.
Max : And what do we win ?
Host : You'll see later. Now... See you later !
Everybody appeared on the bars. The challenge is starting.
After 2 hours...
MysteryMan : Aish, my arms are so tired. 😩
Max : Let's say I have another problem.
Lely : What's the problem Max ? 🙁
Max : Look, I have to go to the bathroom really bad. It's painful to stay here, while hearing the waves moving. 😖
Lely : Guess you'll have to hold it... 😕
Max : It's really hard though, it's pressuring on my abs, while I'm stucked on this freaking bar... 😑
Lely : Look, I also have to go to the bathroom... But we can't leave like this. And I'm not gonna lose this for a freaking stupid need.
Hours later...
Max : Lely, I feel like I'm dying by inside...😣
Lely : Me too but we're the two last. We just have to wait DarkShell to fall--
*DarkShell falling*
Max : Yay ! 😓
Host : Congrats to Max and Lely because they have won... Ah yeah, I forgot to mention : there is 2 winners per round. Now you're free, take a break !
*Max and Lely arguing on their way back home while walking fast*
Max : I was focused on this freaking stupid need during all the round so I think we did incredible, without realizing it.
Lely : But getting stucked on a bar was a bad experience. And let's say we weren't in the best settings to do this. Anyways Max, you okay with us pairing ? Because I have to admit, I like you...
Max : No, I was about to suggest it to you. ^^
Lely : Nice ! Thanks. 😁
Max : Anything for you to be happy. Wanna do something this evening ?
Lely : Nothing special, just spending time together. I don't feel in ease with the others, I don't know why. Oh look, there's a cute crab over here !
After a sunset stroll on the beach, and various activities, everybody got back to the camp.
During the dinner...
DarkShell : I and Toadboi decided to pair !
Lely : I'm gonna avoid this team as much as possible.
Max : I paired with Lely, he's very nice ! 😁
*Lely's blushing*
Redshell : I don't paired with anyone so far...
Hampter : I paired with Osc-omb, he's genius like me.
VC : And I paired with MysteryMan.
This evening, let's say they were having fun. It would be less fun tomorrow, but after all, let them have fun. It was a nice evening for everbuddy and the pairs slept together (so Redshell paired with Gamerlion). They're all sleeping and that's why I'm whispering. See you tomorrow... For the next chapter !
Yeah I did it.
That's done. I'm not respecting personnalities you gave, sorry.
Give a feedback please !
Reste juste à espérer que DarkShell aura la même évolution que dans la réalité.
Sinon j'ai adoré !
C'est vrai ! En fait, il a failli recommencer tout son processus de "tu m'as fait si tu devrais être" etc etc aujourd'hui et il m'a menacé de me report ; c'est un personnage que je vais faire évoluer...
Et merci 💜💜💜