(Series) ©The Twilightverse

You're not boring when you're writing something. It just doesn't makes sense, that's another issue. It just feels unnatural and meh that's another issue, but it's not that boring.

If you want advice for how to write fanfics, look at my episode for this fanfic, or re-read MKPC danganronpa

Yeah exactly.
Your end was pretty epic and it felt like Danganronpa, it actually felt exciting, made sense, was flowing well and was fun.

While for the Ralsei's parts... I'm sorry Ralsei but this ain't it

For me, it would be similar, but MysteryMan’s in 4th (don’t get me wrong, it’s good, but nothing special compared to the 3 above)

Your opinion is biased

Then we don't have the same tastes
To me, swearing isn't an issue at all and can make the fanfic more funny, or more sad, more exciting, I don't know. It's like a spice.
I also think MysteryMan's one is good, but I prefer Danganronpa and KohLanta to it pog especially because I'm more familiar with 1) the style and 2) the roster of characters

To me its more like
1) Koh-Lanta Mario 2022 10/10
2) Danganronpa MKPC 9,5/10
3) Toadal Drama n Knuckles 9/10
4) MKPC Archipel 4/10
5) The Twlightverse 3,99/10

Your fanfic is much better than that

Cry about it Based on popularity, I feel like it would be similar, but with Fways’ higher (1st or 2nd, since the fanfic war that never existed is between me and Fways (but I feel like he takes the lead, even if mine has more followers))

Uh excuse me, I don't think it is. It's not well-written contrary to every other fanfic except Twilightverse, it's also very weird, boring, it fails the twists, it's not exciting at all, there's no suspense and there's no fun 😞

I like how it is more a different theme from the rest. While the others are about action, I feel like yours is more comedy, with a bit of action sprinkled in every so often

But comedy is boring and cringe 😔
Everytime I try to do some action scenes it fails.
The scene of the fight with Ralsei in my fanfic just didn't felt grand at all, it felt like... a moment where me and you, Nudge, died, and that's it
There's nothing that could make you excited about the next episode, the next scene, no there's nothing.

I wanna become a good guy in chapter 6, and join forces with the good guys.

The reason why I'm reviving this, is because I didn't give it a proper set-off. To get a final goodbye, I want YOU to make a story on here.  You can name it whatever you want, but remember, make sure to put FINALE in front of the episode you called it. Let's see how you do on here!

Also,  you can on:y make one episode. Because I want to see ALL of you to make an episode, one at a time. Makes sense, right? Idc if is part 1, part 2, part 3 btw.

Are The Shards Based On Kirby 64 The Crystal Shards? Because I Feel Like Multiple Things Have Shards In Them And It Shouldn't Be Considered Copying Another Thing Due To The Amount Of Times Shards Have Been Used.

Nudge basically created a fanfic with shards right before this one so...