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Short Science-Fiction story I have been working on!

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Messages 513 - Mario Mario
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I started this story as an English assignment.

Everyone was supposed to go to a specific page in their independent novels we were reading in class (I don't remember which page, but we were all supposed to go to the same page number.) and go to the third line down, and we were supposed to use that line as a prompt to write something. It could be almost anything, I chose to write a story. The line I got was "Don’t mind me, and don’t worry." from the Douglas Adams book "Mostly Harmless". That is what I decided to name my story! I didn't get the story done in class, but my teacher said it was fine. I decided to continue the story on my own time for fun.
Here it is. :D
Messages 513 - Mario Mario
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Don't mind me, and don't worry!

Some time into the future, there was a librarian. She wanted to test out a new technology that had been in the works, and she needed an assistant to help her. So she put up a good deal of help wanted posters. She had waited all day until finally, she found her assistant.

A male came into the library and told the librarian he could be her assistant. She said that sounds great and told him why he was there. He was told to go to a special area in the library to a particular shelf and look for a very unusual book. He wandered around the library for a while until he finally found the book.

He pulled the book off the shelf, and the book flipped to the very middle page. Some people walked by him, and he just said to them, “Don’t mind me, and don’t worry.". The people just went on with what they were doing. He then stared into the book he was holding for a good few seconds, and he was gone. Two of the people standing further away saw him disappear and saw that his book had dropped to the floor, so they ran to where they saw the book drop. One of them picked the book up off the ground and looked at it it had "Library Teleportation Testing." written on its front cover.
Ne t'occupe pas de moi, et ne t'inquiète pas !


Dans le futur, il y avait un bibliothécaire. Elle voulait tester une nouvelle technologie qui avait été dans les travaux, et elle avait besoin d'un assistant pour l'aider. Alors elle a mis en place une bonne partie de l'aide voulait affiches. Elle avait attendu toute la journée jusqu'à ce que finalement, elle a trouvé son assistant.

Un homme est entré dans la bibliothèque et a dit au bibliothécaire qu'il pouvait être son assistant. Elle a dit que ça sonne bien et lui a dit pourquoi il était là. On lui a dit d'aller à une zone spéciale dans la bibliothèque à une étagère particulière et de chercher un livre très inhabituel. Il a erré autour de la bibliothèque pendant un certain temps jusqu'à ce qu'il trouve finalement le livre.

Il a retiré le livre de l'étagère, et le livre a basculé à la page du milieu. Certaines personnes passaient près de lui, et il leur a juste dit: «Ne vous occupez pas de moi, et ne vous inquiétez pas. Les gens ont continué avec ce qu'ils faisaient. Il regarda alors dans le livre qu'il tenait pendant quelques bonnes secondes, et il était parti. Deux des personnes qui se tenaient plus loin l'ont vu disparaître et ont vu que son livre était tombé par terre, alors ils ont couru à l'endroit où ils ont vu le livre tomber. L'un d'eux a ramassé le livre sur le sol et l'a regardé qu'il avait "Bibliothèque Test de téléportation." écrit sur sa couverture.
Messages 513 - Mario Mario
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What are you thoughts on the story?

Was it good?

Was it bad?

Should I make a sequel?
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  It is amazing.
Messages 513 - Mario Mario
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buggaboo wrote:
  It is amazing.

Thanks for your feedback!
Messages 595 - Mario Mario
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I like this story. Reminds me of Doctor Who.
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Messages 2590 - King Mario King Mario
Can you translate in French too, please ?
Messages 513 - Mario Mario
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ByoT wrote:
Can you translate in French too, please ?

IDK if I can sorry...
I might be able to try...
Messages 513 - Mario Mario
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ByoT wrote:
Can you translate in French too, please ?

IDK if I can sorry...
I might be able to try...

IDK how good the translation is?
Can someone who is good enough at French and English tell me how accurate the translation is?

Messages 513 - Mario Mario
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I like this story. Reminds me of Doctor Who.

I really like Doctor Who!

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