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Messages 280 - Toadsworth Toadsworth
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Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Mario100 wrote:
Lely wrote:
Lely wrote:
can i join?

name: golend (last name: emerdal)

colour:#6c2791 (hex code)

personality: kind but can be mean

species: idk something to do with dragons?

annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks

gender: Female (but they are GAY)

No spots left. And even if there were it would be first came first served, so RedPikmin


whatever but a fanfic shouldnt have a limit on people

Yes it should. Last time I literally had 36 people on the roster. How am I supposed to remember all of them ?? To give all of them good lines ?? And it is super pissy to write overall.

And I'm over here with 20+ people in mine lol 💀

which fanfic?

Darkness Overtaking (MATURE WARNING)

@Mario100 her i come
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Messages 10971 - King Mario King Mario
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battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Chapter 8 : Good At Love
Is it your fault, or is it my thoughts ?
Max : Okay so. To whoever is in my team, I want us to stay together at all times. No separation, not even a single one.
Lely : I think we should go in small groups. VC and Noob, you should go for the beaches. Alice and Ben, try to not fight with each other and go for the hills and the caverns. Me and Nudge will go in the cities, if that is alright, and our meeting point will be the huts.
VC : You have great leadership skills
Nudge : I should complain but I feel like despite being the dumbest, you also have a lot of experience
Max : I think we should head for the mountaintop. There must be something high up there.

And with that, both teams began.
VC : Going from the mountain to the beach is gonna be so hard.
Noob : We should ask for vehicles.
VC : But we don't even have a license !
Noob : Tell me, who cares ?
VC : It's not that, but how do we even find one ?
Noob : True...

Max : Okay, this might be tough. The pathway is very thin, and the slope seems steep. I don't know if it's worth it.
Krazey : At least from there, you can see the fragments shining !
Max : What if they're just lampposts ?
Krazey : Something is up there ! I have a gut feeling.
Max : I think it's kind of dangerous... but okay, if you say so.


And with that, the Teal Team began climbing. Max's feet were slowly trying to walk carefully on the slope that felt almost like it was vertical. After five minutes, people got tired.

Choco : Ahh... I cannot feel my foot...
Angrybird : I feel so tired...
James : I don't trust any of this.
Max : It really does seem dangerous...
Krazey : Everything will be fine... we will get there.
Choco : Wait... I smell something...
Max : What ?
Choco : AHHHH ! BLOOD IS ON MY HAND ! THERE IS BLOOD !


As they started yelling, every of their teammates turned to them. Max used his phone's light to figure out what was happening ; and a dead, crushed Pianta was on the floor, full of blood.

Angrybird : WHAT ??? OH MY GOD !! WE NEED TO GO BACK !!!!
Dayzi : This seems to mean something... but what ?
Max : I don't know... but I'm scared.
Krazey : I... don't know.


And then suddenly, a boulder fell from the top of the mountain. He was going rapidly and was about to crush them. They all started yelling and running for their life, as the boulder continued to roll. After some time they ended up to the point where they were before, scared. Sadly, Max's ankle had twisted and he could not stand up anymore.

Max : I... can't even stand up.

The boy cried, as he felt weak and pained at the same time. The rest of his team was shocked. Why did a boulder fall ? What was happening ? Then they saw a figure lit up by the moon at the top of the mountain... and they understood.
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Messages 178 - Bowser Bowser
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United States
SI_Invu wrote:
Chapter 8 : Good At Love
Is it your fault, or is it my thoughts ?
Max : Okay so. To whoever is in my team, I want us to stay together at all times. No separation, not even a single one.
Lely : I think we should go in small groups. VC and Noob, you should go for the beaches. Alice and Ben, try to not fight with each other and go for the hills and the caverns. Me and Nudge will go in the cities, if that is alright, and our meeting point will be the huts.
VC : You have great leadership skills
Nudge : I should complain but I feel like despite being the dumbest, you also have a lot of experience
Max : I think we should head for the mountaintop. There must be something high up there.

And with that, both teams began.
VC : Going from the mountain to the beach is gonna be so hard.
Noob : We should ask for vehicles.
VC : But we don't even have a license !
Noob : Tell me, who cares ?
VC : It's not that, but how do we even find one ?
Noob : True...

Max : Okay, this might be tough. The pathway is very thin, and the slope seems steep. I don't know if it's worth it.
Krazey : At least from there, you can see the fragments shining !
Max : What if they're just lampposts ?
Krazey : Something is up there ! I have a gut feeling.
Max : I think it's kind of dangerous... but okay, if you say so.


And with that, the Teal Team began climbing. Max's feet were slowly trying to walk carefully on the slope that felt almost like it was vertical. After five minutes, people got tired.

Choco : Ahh... I cannot feel my foot...
Angrybird : I feel so tired...
James : I don't trust any of this.
Max : It really does seem dangerous...
Krazey : Everything will be fine... we will get there.
Choco : Wait... I smell something...
Max : What ?
Choco : AHHHH ! BLOOD IS ON MY HAND ! THERE IS BLOOD !


As they started yelling, every of their teammates turned to them. Max used his phone's light to figure out what was happening ; and a dead, crushed Pianta was on the floor, full of blood.

Angrybird : WHAT ??? OH MY GOD !! WE NEED TO GO BACK !!!!
Dayzi : This seems to mean something... but what ?
Max : I don't know... but I'm scared.
Krazey : I... don't know.


And then suddenly, a boulder fell from the top of the mountain. He was going rapidly and was about to crush them. They all started yelling and running for their life, as the boulder continued to roll. After some time they ended up to the point where they were before, scared. Sadly, Max's ankle had twisted and he could not stand up anymore.

Max : I... can't even stand up.

The boy cried, as he felt weak and pained at the same time. The rest of his team was shocked. Why did a boulder fall ? What was happening ? Then they saw a figure lit up by the moon at the top of the mountain... and they understood.


Very short, but very good.
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Cliffhanger makes me want MORE
Messages 10971 - King Mario King Mario
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France
SI_Invu wrote:
Chapter 8 : Good At Love
Is it your fault, or is it my thoughts ?
Max : Okay so. To whoever is in my team, I want us to stay together at all times. No separation, not even a single one.
Lely : I think we should go in small groups. VC and Noob, you should go for the beaches. Alice and Ben, try to not fight with each other and go for the hills and the caverns. Me and Nudge will go in the cities, if that is alright, and our meeting point will be the huts.
VC : You have great leadership skills
Nudge : I should complain but I feel like despite being the dumbest, you also have a lot of experience
Max : I think we should head for the mountaintop. There must be something high up there.

And with that, both teams began.
VC : Going from the mountain to the beach is gonna be so hard.
Noob : We should ask for vehicles.
VC : But we don't even have a license !
Noob : Tell me, who cares ?
VC : It's not that, but how do we even find one ?
Noob : True...

Max : Okay, this might be tough. The pathway is very thin, and the slope seems steep. I don't know if it's worth it.
Krazey : At least from there, you can see the fragments shining !
Max : What if they're just lampposts ?
Krazey : Something is up there ! I have a gut feeling.
Max : I think it's kind of dangerous... but okay, if you say so.


And with that, the Teal Team began climbing. Max's feet were slowly trying to walk carefully on the slope that felt almost like it was vertical. After five minutes, people got tired.

Choco : Ahh... I cannot feel my foot...
Angrybird : I feel so tired...
James : I don't trust any of this.
Max : It really does seem dangerous...
Krazey : Everything will be fine... we will get there.
Choco : Wait... I smell something...
Max : What ?
Choco : AHHHH ! BLOOD IS ON MY HAND ! THERE IS BLOOD !


As they started yelling, every of their teammates turned to them. Max used his phone's light to figure out what was happening ; and a dead, crushed Pianta was on the floor, full of blood.

Angrybird : WHAT ??? OH MY GOD !! WE NEED TO GO BACK !!!!
Dayzi : This seems to mean something... but what ?
Max : I don't know... but I'm scared.
Krazey : I... don't know.


And then suddenly, a boulder fell from the top of the mountain. He was going rapidly and was about to crush them. They all started yelling and running for their life, as the boulder continued to roll. After some time they ended up to the point where they were before, scared. Sadly, Max's ankle had twisted and he could not stand up anymore.

Max : I... can't even stand up.

The boy cried, as he felt weak and pained at the same time. The rest of his team was shocked. Why did a boulder fall ? What was happening ? Then they saw a figure lit up by the moon at the top of the mountain... and they understood.


Very short, but very good.
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Cliffhanger makes me want MORE

Well I was really tired and did not feel like putting it on hold so yeah. Cliffhanger was voluntary
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Messages 131 - Buzzy Beetle Buzzy Beetle
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Bahamas
wonder where was Ben during this chapter lol prob doing weights


but i just hope he gets development
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Messages 131 - Buzzy Beetle Buzzy Beetle
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Bahamas
Im just gonna start i mini series where i put possible development for characters who dont have it at the moment

Episode 1, Ben

Ben being the Brat that nobody likes, i think it would be good for to slowly become less bratty.

But in a soon episode, he could get mad at his team for maybe cheating or something liek that, and go in his cabin, everyone thinks hes just being bratty but in episode 1 james said something nice about Ben i belive, and i want to build on that, so how about they ahve a talk and become freinds, James teaches Ben to be less bratty, And Ben can teach James to do better at challenges, i think this could be a improvment to both of their characters.

Thoughts?
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Messages 4409 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Fourner wrote:
Im just gonna start i mini series where i put possible development for characters who dont have it at the moment

Episode 1, Ben

Ben being the Brat that nobody likes, i think it would be good for to slowly become less bratty.

But in a soon episode, he could get mad at his team for maybe cheating or something liek that, and go in his cabin, everyone thinks hes just being bratty but in episode 1 james said something nice about Ben i belive, and i want to build on that, so how about they ahve a talk and become freinds, James teaches Ben to be less bratty, And Ben can teach James to do better at challenges, i think this could be a improvment to both of their characters.

Thoughts?

Bro thanks for making even more obvious than you are both CyClops and Lance/Cario (and maybe even PokeGD lmao)
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Messages 131 - Buzzy Beetle Buzzy Beetle
vs5000 pts ★ Novice
battle5000 pts ★ Novice
Bahamas
Senko wrote:
Fourner wrote:
Im just gonna start i mini series where i put possible development for characters who dont have it at the moment

Episode 1, Ben

Ben being the Brat that nobody likes, i think it would be good for to slowly become less bratty.

But in a soon episode, he could get mad at his team for maybe cheating or something liek that, and go in his cabin, everyone thinks hes just being bratty but in episode 1 james said something nice about Ben i belive, and i want to build on that, so how about they ahve a talk and become freinds, James teaches Ben to be less bratty, And Ben can teach James to do better at challenges, i think this could be a improvment to both of their characters.

Thoughts?

Bro thanks for making even more obvious than you are both CyClops and Lance/Cario (and maybe even PokeGD lmao)
well havent you IP banend them? then how am i a alt? Just ben is a good cgaracter that needs some develempment
Messages 10971 - King Mario King Mario
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battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Fourner wrote:
Im just gonna start i mini series where i put possible development for characters who dont have it at the moment

Episode 1, Ben

Ben being the Brat that nobody likes, i think it would be good for to slowly become less bratty.

But in a soon episode, he could get mad at his team for maybe cheating or something liek that, and go in his cabin, everyone thinks hes just being bratty but in episode 1 james said something nice about Ben i belive, and i want to build on that, so how about they ahve a talk and become freinds, James teaches Ben to be less bratty, And Ben can teach James to do better at challenges, i think this could be a improvment to both of their characters.

Thoughts?

I have already planned character development for every character, leave it to me
Messages 4409 - King Mario King Mario
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battle12573 pts ★ Champion
France
Fourner wrote:
Senko wrote:
Fourner wrote:
Im just gonna start i mini series where i put possible development for characters who dont have it at the moment

Episode 1, Ben

Ben being the Brat that nobody likes, i think it would be good for to slowly become less bratty.

But in a soon episode, he could get mad at his team for maybe cheating or something liek that, and go in his cabin, everyone thinks hes just being bratty but in episode 1 james said something nice about Ben i belive, and i want to build on that, so how about they ahve a talk and become freinds, James teaches Ben to be less bratty, And Ben can teach James to do better at challenges, i think this could be a improvment to both of their characters.

Thoughts?

Bro thanks for making even more obvious than you are both CyClops and Lance/Cario (and maybe even PokeGD lmao)
well havent you IP banend them? then how am i a alt? Just ben is a good cgaracter that needs some develempment

There's litteraly 2 ways to escape an ip ban, first one is using a different device (probably what you're doing rn I guess) and the second one is using a VPN to change the ip and bypass the ban
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Messages 131 - Buzzy Beetle Buzzy Beetle
vs5000 pts ★ Novice
battle5000 pts ★ Novice
Bahamas
Senko wrote:
Fourner wrote:
Senko wrote:
Fourner wrote:
Im just gonna start i mini series where i put possible development for characters who dont have it at the moment

Episode 1, Ben

Ben being the Brat that nobody likes, i think it would be good for to slowly become less bratty.

But in a soon episode, he could get mad at his team for maybe cheating or something liek that, and go in his cabin, everyone thinks hes just being bratty but in episode 1 james said something nice about Ben i belive, and i want to build on that, so how about they ahve a talk and become freinds, James teaches Ben to be less bratty, And Ben can teach James to do better at challenges, i think this could be a improvment to both of their characters.

Thoughts?

Bro thanks for making even more obvious than you are both CyClops and Lance/Cario (and maybe even PokeGD lmao)
well havent you IP banend them? then how am i a alt? Just ben is a good cgaracter that needs some develempment

There's litteraly 2 ways to escape an ip ban, first one is using a different device (probably what you're doing rn I guess) and the second one is using a VPN to change the ip and bypass the ban

VPNS ARE COMPLICATED AND IM TOO BROKE TO HAVE A DIFFRENT DEVICE oh crap cap lock is on
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Messages 10971 - King Mario King Mario
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battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Chapter 9 : Run Away

Coming soon...
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Messages 526 - Mario Mario
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battle4978 pts ★ Budding pilot
United States
Name: Mike
Color: Tan
Personnality: Nice, Serious, Hotheaded, (sometimes) Sarcastic
Species: Human
Pronouns: He/him/his





Wait no spots left NO- *gets kicked out*
Messages 2152 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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United States
Senko wrote:
Fourner wrote:
Senko wrote:
Fourner wrote:
Im just gonna start i mini series where i put possible development for characters who dont have it at the moment

Episode 1, Ben

Ben being the Brat that nobody likes, i think it would be good for to slowly become less bratty.

But in a soon episode, he could get mad at his team for maybe cheating or something liek that, and go in his cabin, everyone thinks hes just being bratty but in episode 1 james said something nice about Ben i belive, and i want to build on that, so how about they ahve a talk and become freinds, James teaches Ben to be less bratty, And Ben can teach James to do better at challenges, i think this could be a improvment to both of their characters.

Thoughts?

Bro thanks for making even more obvious than you are both CyClops and Lance/Cario (and maybe even PokeGD lmao)
well havent you IP banend them? then how am i a alt? Just ben is a good cgaracter that needs some develempment

There's litteraly 2 ways to escape an ip ban, first one is using a different device (probably what you're doing rn I guess) and the second one is using a VPN to change the ip and bypass the ban

There's also a little thing called Incognito Mode
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Messages 131 - Buzzy Beetle Buzzy Beetle
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Bahamas
im still doing the series cause why not :p

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Messages 10971 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Fourner wrote:
im still doing the series cause why not :p


Do it... in your phone notes

Yeah I don't even care you won't get a word in the writing. But can you actually listen to what others have told you ? Others find it annoying, and I also told you it'd lead nowhere. Why are you so stubborn ? On a public forum, not only your opinion matters. You're playing with fire, but you are gonna get sanctioned someday. These little actions piss off everyone, including the mods.
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Messages 768 - Mario Mario
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France
SI_Invu wrote:
Chapter 9 : Run Away

Coming soon...


Waw , quel épisode incroyable !

Répartition des paroles :
Tout le monde : 0

Bon bah j'attends le 10 alors ...

Oui , je devais faire cette blague désolé
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Messages 131 - Buzzy Beetle Buzzy Beetle
vs5000 pts ★ Novice
battle5000 pts ★ Novice
Bahamas
SI_Invu wrote:
Fourner wrote:
im still doing the series cause why not :p


Do it... in your phone notes

Yeah I don't even care you won't get a word in the writing. But can you actually listen to what others have told you ? Others find it annoying, and I also told you it'd lead nowhere. Why are you so stubborn ? On a public forum, not only your opinion matters. You're playing with fire, but you are gonna get sanctioned someday. These little actions piss off everyone, including the mods.

oh i looked at the messages and ill stop.
Messages 10971 - King Mario King Mario
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battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Chapter 9 : Run Away
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...

9:45PM

Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.

When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....


Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.

Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking

Cameron : Okay that's it...

Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.

Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...

Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.

Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.


VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.

Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.

Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.

Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.

Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.

Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.

Cameron : NO... AHHH !

He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.

Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...

MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
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Messages 131 - Buzzy Beetle Buzzy Beetle
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Bahamas
SI_Lely wrote:
Chapter 9 : Run Away
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...

9:45PM

Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.

When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....


Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.

Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking

Cameron : Okay that's it...

Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.

Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...

Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.

Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.


VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.

Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.

Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.

Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.

Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.

Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.

Cameron : NO... AHHH !

He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.

Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...

MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end

Cameron having lots of lines

Ben: give me your lines?


lol but all jokes aside best episode yet, also epic cliffhanger cameron be gettin arrested 11/10
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