[Fanfic] A General's Journal
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5563 pts ★ NoviceOn 2023-04-13 at 20:31:42
WARNING! Spoilers for The Super Mario Bros Movie! Don't reveal the spoiler if you want to go into the movie almost completely clean!
Day 1:
I woke up. I was in a hospital. The doctors were celebrating, they told me I was in a coma for a month. I looked at my right arm, it was nothing but bone. Guess I'm even more unique now, part Koopa, part Spiny, now part Dry Bones. When I got up my right wing felt stiff, but I couldn't feel my left one at all, I guess it was also destroyed. I walked out of the hospital, the kingdom was still the same, but a lot emptier, there was no one is sight, I walked to the castle, the doors opened and I was let in. King Bowser was not on the throne, instead his son was, I found that amusing because Junior is still 3! I asked the young king where Lord Bowser was, he told me "My dad got captured by the big meanie Mario!" Lots of thoughts went through my mind! Mario survived! I risked my life for nothing! Lord Bowser is captured in the Mushroom Kingdom! How did Mario even capture him!? Did he rescue his brother and the penguins? At lest that mad Luma is gone. The young king then said "You were gone for too long so I had to replace you with another guy!" I was replaced! I get why, but it really hurt, I walked out of the castle and got home. I had alot to think about.
-Former general: S. Koopa
I woke up. I was in a hospital. The doctors were celebrating, they told me I was in a coma for a month. I looked at my right arm, it was nothing but bone. Guess I'm even more unique now, part Koopa, part Spiny, now part Dry Bones. When I got up my right wing felt stiff, but I couldn't feel my left one at all, I guess it was also destroyed. I walked out of the hospital, the kingdom was still the same, but a lot emptier, there was no one is sight, I walked to the castle, the doors opened and I was let in. King Bowser was not on the throne, instead his son was, I found that amusing because Junior is still 3! I asked the young king where Lord Bowser was, he told me "My dad got captured by the big meanie Mario!" Lots of thoughts went through my mind! Mario survived! I risked my life for nothing! Lord Bowser is captured in the Mushroom Kingdom! How did Mario even capture him!? Did he rescue his brother and the penguins? At lest that mad Luma is gone. The young king then said "You were gone for too long so I had to replace you with another guy!" I was replaced! I get why, but it really hurt, I walked out of the castle and got home. I had alot to think about.
-Former general: S. Koopa
On 2023-04-14 at 03:40:41
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Ummm, interesting concept. I love on how MKPC most of the fanfics are the characters talking between each other in a theater performance like script, while it's a journal you find there. Quite interesting and quite good. Keep it up ! (I actually even thought of doing something like that once...)
On 2023-04-14 at 15:50:58
Day 2: I woke up at 3:35 AM, because that's when I have to back to troop work. But now I don't do that, I decided to get up anyway, I had breakfast (which was expired cereal) and decided to get a morning run. During that morning run, out of instinct I tried to fly but of course it wasn't very long. When the sun rose I decided to visit the grave yard to see if anyone died in the battle. There were your normal troop members, like Charlie D. Koopa and Chris P. Bro. But there was also some big figures who were lost. King Bob-omb stood out the most, I was good friends with him. Some Goombas came to ask me where I've been and why I wasn't at the castle. I explained, they understood then I moved on. It felt off living as a "regular Koopa". It felt like I was living a whole different life. When it was time for lunch I stopped of at Goom-Burger. I met Shane there, he asked the same questions as the Goombas did, then he asked "Has this changed your view on the kingdom?" I didn't answer. That was a big question, I did feel angry but I understood why I was replaced. I finished my lunch, said goodbye to Shane, then left. I stood out in the street, having a blue-shell was not common itself, having spikes on it was another thing, then having only one wing, and an arm that's nothing but bone, I'm a true oddball. I was seen as the cool kid in school, when people tried to bully me because I was different, my admirers would take them on, I think it was mostly the large amount of them that got those bully kids to stop. When I took the test to get into the Koopa Troup, I had to take 3 different tests, the standard, flight, and spiny test. It was a lot but I made it, then I went through the ranks and became general, the pride and glory, it was one of the best moments in my life! now all that is taken away. Mabey I am starting to dislike the royal line.
-S. Koopa
-S. Koopa
On 2023-04-15 at 18:52:08
Day 3: I CAN'T TAKE ANYMORE QUESTIONS! I have been asked why I'm not in the Koopa Troup, countless times!!! I just can't take it anymore! So I went to Le Chomper Bar to forget about it all. I met Bary there, I expected him to ask the same questions, but Bary already knew! He was obviously very drunk (He's drunk 98.5% of the time), he gave me some random advise that wasn't helpful. But then he said "Why *hick* don't yah *hick* get Lord Bowser *hick* back." Despite him being so out of it, I thought that was a good idea, maybey I was also loopy. I went home and waited until midnight, then I got my old standard kart out, I put my helmet back on (I haven't worn it since I was replaced), then I rolled out, heading to the Mushroom Kingdom, thinking my plan would work! how stupid am I?! I drove very far, toom some shortcuts, and then there I was. The Mushroom Kingdom was bigger than I remembered it being, but no matter, I can still break into the castle. I went into anti-gravity mode to climb the mountain, then soon I was on the same level as the castle, time to go to bullet mode. I was speeding through the doors the guards tried to chase me, but Toads are slower on foot. I made my way to the dungeons and stopped, Lord Bowser was nowhere to be seen! I was confused when. "Got yah!" I was in handcuffs by the guards, they forced me into a cell. "You're gonna be in here for a loooong time!" Then they left, I am now just in a cell, I tried to use my shell to get out but the bars were too strong. Now I guess I'll just have to serve my time. I'm so stupid.
-S. Koopa
-S. Koopa
On 2023-04-18 at 00:11:48
Sorry for triple post 
Day ???: It has been TOO LONG! I have been in this cell for God knows how long! I can't take it anymore! When I was thinking about exploding the bars, a guard walked up to my cell. "Alright, you've served your time. You can leave, but under strict supervision! Proffesor, if you please." The 'Proffesor' gave me a new arm and a new wing! "Don't go trying anything funny! Or ZAP! I do belive that the guard will excourt you out." I was finally shown sunshine! It was refreshing! I expected alot of staring, but the Toads were nice! They were oddly welcoming. I managed to rent a place, I sat down on the floor (The house was empty) and I thought, I have been doing that alot because there was nothing else to do. I started to dislike Lord Bowser, he's always been questionable, but now I'm starting to see him as a bad king.
-S. Koopa
-S. Koopa
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