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Messages 10982 - King Mario King Mario
vs35052 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Fiery wrote:
It’s crazy how I keep on thinking of plot elements later in the story but I can’t find a way to make the first episode not full of filler

Same, which is why I decided to work on another fanfic for now ^^ But let's be honest every fanfic writer has gone through this... even Hifumi Yamada
Messages 3629 - King Mario King Mario
vs13568 pts ★ Champion
battle5368 pts ★ Novice
United Kingdom
Episode 1: The Envelope in the Locker

We arrived in the year 5,000,020,023. A warp pipe was there before us, and curiosity got the best of us, but we could have never known what tragedies would’ve happened. We all booked into a hotel.

Fiery: Alright, so I’ve watched the news and it said that The Sun is gone.
They didn’t give a lot of details but that’s pretty bad.

Cringeh: It said something about an explosion. We should check the laboratory.

*At the labaratory*

The laboratory was worn down, doors were busted down and this seemed to not be cleaned until forever.


Lely: This place has definitely seen better days
Nudge: I found an envelope in this locker
Fiery: Let’s get back to the hotel and tell the others what we found

Next episode soon


Sorry its short but take it or have me procrastinate for a week
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Messages 268 - Toadsworth Toadsworth
vs6803 pts ★ Racer
battle5701 pts ★ Novice
Trinidad and Tobago
Fiery wrote:
Episode 1: The Envelope in the Locker

We arrived in the year 5,600,020,000. A warp pipe was there before us, and curiosity got the best of us, but we could have never known what tragedies would’ve happened. We all booked into a hotel.

Fiery: Alright, so I’ve watched the news and it said that The Sun is gone.
They didn’t give a lot of details but that’s pretty bad.

Cringeh: It said something about an explosion. We should check the laboratory.

*At the labaratory*

The laboratory was worn down, doors were busted down and this seemed to not be cleaned until forever.


Lely: This place has definitely seen better days
Nudge: I found an envelope in this locker
Fiery: Let’s get back to the hotel and tell the others what we found

Next episode soon


Sorry its short but take it or have me procrastinate for a week

Long live the Soviet Union
Messages 3629 - King Mario King Mario
vs13568 pts ★ Champion
battle5368 pts ★ Novice
United Kingdom
I’ll feature more characters in Episode 2
Messages 3629 - King Mario King Mario
vs13568 pts ★ Champion
battle5368 pts ★ Novice
United Kingdom
Alright tbh the last episode was 4 months ago, I've been procrastinating for ages, SATs are coming up in 4 weeks so like damn I feel like this gotta be put on hiatus.
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