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Messages 5025 - King Mario King Mario
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Nepal
Cosmo739 wrote:
Cosmo739 wrote:
So the plot is that everyone shrunk down to miniature size, and they have to work together, or not, to turn back to normal. If you all want to join, I need the following:
Name
Color (Optional)
Personality
ONE ability
Any other information about your character that might be relevant.

Sign up, or not, it's your choice.

The stars of our show:
Popplio
Nudge
Chilli
Dark
Lely
Me, Cosmo
Noob
Fiery

MisterCringeh
Dark blue
Idk for personnality
telekinesis ?

Please give at least a basic personality :)

Maybe, talking to much And loving Bread.
Messages 313 - Peach Peach
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Canada
Cosmo739 wrote:
Cosmo739 wrote:
So the plot is that everyone shrunk down to miniature size, and they have to work together, or not, to turn back to normal. If you all want to join, I need the following:
Name
Color (Optional)
Personality
ONE ability
Any other information about your character that might be relevant.

Sign up, or not, it's your choice.

The stars of our show:
Popplio
Nudge
Chilli
Dark
Lely
Me, Cosmo
Noob
Fiery

MisterCringeh
Dark blue
Idk for personnality
telekinesis ?

Please give at least a basic personality :)

Maybe, talking to much And loving Bread.

Thanks!
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Messages 4342 - King Mario King Mario
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France
- Max
- Teal
- This time I'm going to rewrite everything because I have nothing else to do hap
I'm a nice person, but who can quickly get angry if someone attacks his friends (one person in particular you already know who :p)
I'm very protective of certain people (you still know who XD), and have a certain sense of humor.
- Take one of the 2 powers I mentioned on MisterCringeh's fanfic, I won't be able to choose x)
- Has a Snorlax but doesn't use him very much
Messages 313 - Peach Peach
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Canada
Senko wrote:
- Max
- Teal
- This time I'm going to rewrite everything because I have nothing else to do hap
I'm a nice person, but who can quickly get angry if someone attacks his friends (one person in particular you already know who :p)
I'm very protective of certain people (you still know who XD), and have a certain sense of humor.
- Take one of the 2 powers I mentioned on MisterCringeh's fanfic, I won't be able to choose x)
- Has a Snorlax but doesn't use him very much

Sorry but I do need to know who your protective of so I can make the fanfic as good as possible. :|
Messages 4342 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Cosmo739 wrote:
Senko wrote:
- Max
- Teal
- This time I'm going to rewrite everything because I have nothing else to do hap
I'm a nice person, but who can quickly get angry if someone attacks his friends (one person in particular you already know who :p)
I'm very protective of certain people (you still know who XD), and have a certain sense of humor.
- Take one of the 2 powers I mentioned on MisterCringeh's fanfic, I won't be able to choose x)
- Has a Snorlax but doesn't use him very much

Sorry but I do need to know who your protective of so I can make the fanfic as good as possible. :|

Ah I thought everyone would understand x)
I was talking about Lely lol
Messages 313 - Peach Peach
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Canada
SPOTS ARE CLOSED FOR EPISODE 1! YOU CAN STILL JOIN, JUST LATER. EPISODE WILL COME OUT HOPEFULLY LATER TODAY!
Messages 313 - Peach Peach
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Canada
Senko wrote:
Cosmo739 wrote:
Senko wrote:
- Max
- Teal
- This time I'm going to rewrite everything because I have nothing else to do hap
I'm a nice person, but who can quickly get angry if someone attacks his friends (one person in particular you already know who :p)
I'm very protective of certain people (you still know who XD), and have a certain sense of humor.
- Take one of the 2 powers I mentioned on MisterCringeh's fanfic, I won't be able to choose x)
- Has a Snorlax but doesn't use him very much

Sorry but I do need to know who your protective of so I can make the fanfic as good as possible. :|

Ah I thought everyone would understand x)
I was talking about Lely lol

Thanks!
Messages 313 - Peach Peach
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Canada
Name: Chilli
Ability: Can breathe fire or on rare occasions when we're in big trouble can become Chilli.exe: a super-strong demon
Color: Red-orange
Species: Red Yoshi
Personality: look at other fanfics

Sorry to bother you but I'd like a personality description, as I don't know which fanfics to look in.
Messages 5025 - King Mario King Mario
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Nepal
Cosmo739 wrote:
Name: Chilli
Ability: Can breathe fire or on rare occasions when we're in big trouble can become Chilli.exe: a super-strong demon
Color: Red-orange
Species: Red Yoshi
Personality: look at other fanfics

Sorry to bother you but I'd like a personality description, as I don't know which fanfics to look in.

You triple posted !
mario_facepalm1
Messages 313 - Peach Peach
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Canada
Cosmo739 wrote:
Name: Chilli
Ability: Can breathe fire or on rare occasions when we're in big trouble can become Chilli.exe: a super-strong demon
Color: Red-orange
Species: Red Yoshi
Personality: look at other fanfics

Sorry to bother you but I'd like a personality description, as I don't know which fanfics to look in.

You triple posted !

OMG SORRY
Messages 5025 - King Mario King Mario
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battle16626 pts ★ Master
Nepal
Cosmo739 wrote:
Cosmo739 wrote:
Name: Chilli
Ability: Can breathe fire or on rare occasions when we're in big trouble can become Chilli.exe: a super-strong demon
Color: Red-orange
Species: Red Yoshi
Personality: look at other fanfics

Sorry to bother you but I'd like a personality description, as I don't know which fanfics to look in.

You triple posted !

OMG SORRY

No need to be sorry, just you can copy and your message and set all your message in one !
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Messages 362 - Luigi Luigi
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United States
Name Brint
Powers Make bridges.
Personality Creative.
Color Pink
Messages 313 - Peach Peach
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Canada
Name Brint
Powers Make bridges.
Personality Creative.
Color Pink

Your lucky you joined while I'm writing... I'll let you in episode 1 XD
Messages 1899 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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United Kingdom
Can I have a cameo appearance please :$?
Messages 313 - Peach Peach
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Canada
xrunner48 wrote:
Can I have a cameo appearance please :$?

Sure thing! You can even be a part of the main squad since I'm still writing if you want! I'd just need a character description, which you can find the format in the first message.
Messages 313 - Peach Peach
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Canada
Sorry if the colors are inaccurate, not good at picking colors.
Episode 1: Welcome to Tinyland

Cosmo: OK guys, we made it!

Dietsoda: Where are we again, mayfly?

Cosmo: I-it’s Cosmo, and we are at Tinyland. An amusement park-

MisterCringeh: Where everything is tiny!


Popplio: Why aren’t we at a waterpark?


Cosmo: BECAUSE IT’S WINTER!

Popplio: Calm down. Just take us-

MisterCringeh: Maybe to the bread bank?

Noob: Guys, let’s just be grateful! Cosmo paid for-

Max: Uhm, I paid for everyone’s tickets…

Dietsoda: And I paid to not be here, mayfly, but here I am.

Lely: So what do we do here?

Cosmo: I heard that there are these REALLY good drinks. We should get them.

Popplio: At least there’s some form of liquid here.

MisterCringeh: This place is on a lake, and a lake is a form of liquid, so actually this place could be a waterpark-

Chilli: Can you not?

Brint: Guys, there’s a problem. The drink stand is on an island. Wait…

*Brint then makes a bridge to be able to cross to the island*

Cosmo: I forgot that you could do that.

Dark: Come on, keep it moving, people.

*Nudge has a fidget toy*

Cosmo: Where did you get that?

Nudge: Don’t ask.

Fiery: Come, on, mates!

Brint: I still don’t get how you have a British accent when you weren’t-

Fiery: Yes, I was, actually.

Brint: Oh.

Cosmo: We need… 12 Tiny Drinks please!


Lely: Sure thing!

Dark: You also work here…?

Lely: Gotta make money somehow.

*They receive the drinks*

Noob: What if these Tiny Drinks make us tiny?

Dietsoda: That would TOTALLY happen, mayfly.

Cosmo: Can we just drink the drinks?


Nudge: Sure…

*They all drink the drinks, but Nudge pretends to, except Lely still forces him to drink the drink*

Noob: Those were delicious!

*They all begin shrinking*

Max: Uh, guys?

MisterCringeh: Oh my God, we are actually becoming small! I think I saw this-

Everyone else, except Max and Noob: SHUT UP!!!
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xd4
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Messages 5322 - King Mario King Mario
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battle6798 pts ★ Racer
United Kingdom
Cosmo739 wrote:
Sorry if the colors are inaccurate, not good at picking colors.
Episode 1: Welcome to Tinyland

Cosmo: OK guys, we made it!

Dietsoda: Where are we again, mayfly?

Cosmo: I-it’s Cosmo, and we are at Tinyland. An amusement park-

MisterCringeh: Where everything is tiny!


Popplio: Why aren’t we at a waterpark?


Cosmo: BECAUSE IT’S WINTER!

Popplio: Calm down. Just take us-

MisterCringeh: Maybe to the bread bank?

Noob: Guys, let’s just be grateful! Cosmo paid for-

Max: Uhm, I paid for everyone’s tickets…

Dietsoda: And I paid to not be here, mayfly, but here I am.

Lely: So what do we do here?

Cosmo: I heard that there are these REALLY good drinks. We should get them.

Popplio: At least there’s some form of liquid here.

MisterCringeh: This place is on a lake, and a lake is a form of liquid, so actually this place could be a waterpark-

Chilli: Can you not?

Brint: Guys, there’s a problem. The drink stand is on an island. Wait…

*Brint then makes a bridge to be able to cross to the island*

Cosmo: I forgot that you could do that.

Dark: Come on, keep it moving, people.

*Nudge has a fidget toy*

Cosmo: Where did you get that?

Nudge: Don’t ask.

Fiery: Come, on, mates!

Brint: I still don’t get how you have a British accent when you weren’t-

Fiery: Yes, I was, actually.

Brint: Oh.

Cosmo: We need… 12 Tiny Drinks please!


Lely: Sure thing!

Dark: You also work here…?

Lely: Gotta make money somehow.

*They receive the drinks*

Noob: What if these Tiny Drinks make us tiny?

Dietsoda: That would TOTALLY happen, mayfly.

Cosmo: Can we just drink the drinks?


Nudge: Sure…

*They all drink the drinks, but Nudge pretends to, except Lely still forces him to drink the drink*

Noob: Those were delicious!

*They all begin shrinking*

Max: Uh, guys?

MisterCringeh: Oh my God, we are actually becoming small! I think I saw this-

Everyone else, except Max and Noob: SHUT UP!!!

Good episode, but I have a couple things to say (mostly about color)
1.) Lely screw you i could have avoided the shrink if it wasn’t for you snif

2.) Max’s color should be ‘teal’
3.) Chilli’s color looks quite similar to mine. I’d say ‘red’ would be better
4.) Lely’s color should be ‘green’
Messages 313 - Peach Peach
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Canada
Chihiro wrote:
Cosmo739 wrote:
Sorry if the colors are inaccurate, not good at picking colors.
Episode 1: Welcome to Tinyland

Cosmo: OK guys, we made it!

Dietsoda: Where are we again, mayfly?

Cosmo: I-it’s Cosmo, and we are at Tinyland. An amusement park-

MisterCringeh: Where everything is tiny!


Popplio: Why aren’t we at a waterpark?


Cosmo: BECAUSE IT’S WINTER!

Popplio: Calm down. Just take us-

MisterCringeh: Maybe to the bread bank?

Noob: Guys, let’s just be grateful! Cosmo paid for-

Max: Uhm, I paid for everyone’s tickets…

Dietsoda: And I paid to not be here, mayfly, but here I am.

Lely: So what do we do here?

Cosmo: I heard that there are these REALLY good drinks. We should get them.

Popplio: At least there’s some form of liquid here.

MisterCringeh: This place is on a lake, and a lake is a form of liquid, so actually this place could be a waterpark-

Chilli: Can you not?

Brint: Guys, there’s a problem. The drink stand is on an island. Wait…

*Brint then makes a bridge to be able to cross to the island*

Cosmo: I forgot that you could do that.

Dark: Come on, keep it moving, people.

*Nudge has a fidget toy*

Cosmo: Where did you get that?

Nudge: Don’t ask.

Fiery: Come, on, mates!

Brint: I still don’t get how you have a British accent when you weren’t-

Fiery: Yes, I was, actually.

Brint: Oh.

Cosmo: We need… 12 Tiny Drinks please!


Lely: Sure thing!

Dark: You also work here…?

Lely: Gotta make money somehow.

*They receive the drinks*

Noob: What if these Tiny Drinks make us tiny?

Dietsoda: That would TOTALLY happen, mayfly.

Cosmo: Can we just drink the drinks?


Nudge: Sure…

*They all drink the drinks, but Nudge pretends to, except Lely still forces him to drink the drink*

Noob: Those were delicious!

*They all begin shrinking*

Max: Uh, guys?

MisterCringeh: Oh my God, we are actually becoming small! I think I saw this-

Everyone else, except Max and Noob: SHUT UP!!!

Good episode, but I have a couple things to say (mostly about color)
1.) Lely screw you i could have avoided the shrink if it wasn’t for you snif

2.) Max’s color should be ‘teal’
3.) Chilli’s color looks quite similar to mine. I’d say ‘red’ would be better
4.) Lely’s color should be ‘green’

I'm a little color blind so some shades are hard to differentiate from each other. That's why I warned about the colors
ok2
Messages 2362 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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United States
Can I join?
- StarSplizz
- #09f since my color is taken
- Check 40KsKool's fanfic
- Can enter shell to protect itself against enemy attacks
Messages 1138 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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United Kingdom
Cosmo739 wrote:

Dietsoda: That would TOTALLY happen, mayfly.


Oh no, my sarcasm and relentless banter mockery has cursed us. Too bad I didn't learn anything mayflies.

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