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Disclaimer: IlluZhion will be the new writer since I won't have any more time bc for school. Please answer another strawpoll for the fate of the next episode: https://strawpoll.com/Qrgebko0LZp
Messages 2985 - King Mario King Mario
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-Kirbitto- wrote:
Disclaimer: IlluZhion will be the new writer since I won't have any more time bc for school. Please answer another strawpoll for the fate of the next episode: https://strawpoll.com/Qrgebko0LZp

Hmmm all this power.. in that case I must use it to hilariously make sure half the cast dies so a good show
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The second option is much better imo, the first option is not that bad but we need a little bit of suspense instead of a pretty early fight. I am not a fan of the bad ending, I think it's going to be less epic tbh.
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Messages 2985 - King Mario King Mario
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The second option is much better imo, the first option is not that bad but we need a little bit of suspense instead of a pretty early fight. I am not a fan of the bad ending, I think it's going to be less epic tbh.

The bad ending could be genuinely good if written well, and with half of the cast dying it would feel like Danganronpa, and trying to survive I think woulf just add suspense, needs good pacing though, like not everyone should die instantly
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-Kirbitto- wrote:
Disclaimer: IlluZhion will be the new writer since I won't have any more time bc for school. Please answer another strawpoll for the fate of the next episode: https://strawpoll.com/Qrgebko0LZp

How about All of Them at Once
Messages 1224 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Episode 6: Friendly Fire

Betrayer: Hehehe. Goodbye!
Max: Oh shit.

Max jumped as a small pink fist was under his legs.

Max: Ugh, goddamn you Kirbo!
Kirbo: Hehe, chill bro. It’s just a joke, bro.
Max: A joke? A JOKE? YOU ALMOST PUSHED ME INTO LAVA!
Kirbo: Um…Nudge told me to do it.
Nudge: Bro tf you talking bout?
Osc: My bab-ah I mean bunny would not!
Master8: Kirbo, are you the betrayer?
Kirbo: No, I’m just a little clown.
Noob: Idk man, you almost pushed him…
Toad: Hang him! Hang him!
Kid: Ngl Kirbo, that joke was pretty funny.
Popplio: Kid shut up!!!
SSG: Guys remember, we gotta save Lely, Dark, and StarSplizz.
Max: Alright, alright. Okay, so everyone except Nudge and Osc, guard Kirbo.
Osc: Hell yea, forced interaction!!!
Nudge: Let’s have some se-
Fiery: Bro, get a room later.
Nudge: Okay, okay.
IlluZhion: Okay let’s go!

Everyone except Kirbo, Nudge, and Osc went to find Star, Dark, and Lely. But as they were walking, they heard something very loud, repeating itself three times.

???: It’s just a joke…it’s just a joke…IT’S JUST A JOKE!!!
Popplio: AGHHHHHHH, GHOST!!!
Noob: No…I think it’s a real person. But I can’t seem to figure out where it came from.
ER Mac: Me neither…but do you think that was Kirbo?
Fiery: No, it didn’t sound like Kirbo!
Master8: What do we do? We’re aimlessly walking around.
SSG: There’s an opening here, wanna go through it?
Max: I don’t know…
Toad: Man stop being so paranoid. We’ll be fine!
Dietsoda: Max is a scaredy mayfly! How pathetic. I’ll lead the way. Follow me.

Dietsoda crawled through the small opening leading the way. Everyone crawled through except for Max, who was last left.

Max: I can’t go there…the bad feeling is there again.
K: Max, come through! You pussy cat!
Max: Um…I think my knee hurts a bit. I’ll stay here and guard.
K: Okay? I’ll go now. Bye…

But of course, Max lied. He sat by the opening, thinking what was gonna happen if he went through. Meanwhile…

Nudge: Man, beating up Kirbo is fun.
Osc: Hell yeah.
Kirbo: Stop it you motherfuckers!!!
Nudge: It’S jUsT a JoKe BrO.
Kirbo: AHHHHHHHHHH.

While Kirbo is slowly dying from Nudge and Osc, the rest were through the end of the opening.

K: Max will be staying behind. He says his knee hurts.
IlluZhion: What if he’s the betrayer?
Kid: Idk anymore, let’s just go.
Noob: Guys why is there green liquid going in the lava?
Toad: Let’s go there.

They followed the green liquid to find a big laboratory. Every corner was filled with machines, from cubicles and boxes, it filled the room. There was a table in the middle with nothing but a note.

Noob: The note says, “Good luck.” What do-

Noob couldn’t finish the sentence. A loud alarm played and a cage closed the lab. The wall started spewing out acid.

Popplio: AHHH!!! Bye mom, bye dad, bye friends, bye everyone!!!
IlluZhion: Well, I’ll be flying away…
Master8: Ain’t no way man’s fr leaving us.
Fiery: All we gotta do is stop the acid from reaching us. And we need those cork plugs there!

Fiery pointed to cork plugs on top of one of the machines.

Fiery: IlluZhion, fly there and plug the acidic leaks!
IlluZhion: Okay, okay.

IlluZhion flew to the top of the cubicle and grabbed them. He carefully plugged the leaks just in time.

Dietsoda: Holy mayflies! That scared me…
ER Mac: Yup, now how do we get out?
Kid: Lemme shank this bar.
SSG: I don’t think that works…
Kid: Shank! Shank! Shank!!!!!

With some miracle, Kid somehow broke one of the bars wide enough for everyone to escape.

Toad: My butt hurts.
Master8: Aren’t you wearing underwear?
Toad: I’m wearing pants!
K: Anyways, shall we return?
TheOuchy1: Yes, I really don’t lava this place.
Noob: Stop it. Get some help.
SSG: Yeah, anyways. Let’s go see if Max is fine.

While the rest were stuck in the other side of the opening, Max was just lying down on the ground, pondering.

Max: I can’t believe I lied to my friends…man, I’m such a scaredy fox.
???: COME WITH ME, YOU SONS OF A BITCH.
Nudge: Run, sexy ball!!!
Osc: I have short legs! Do you think I can run far?! Ahhhhhh.
Max: That’s Kirbo! I must save Nudge and Osc.

Max ran at the direction of the screams for help. Once he reached to the place where Kirbo was, no one was there, except some pink costume rips and one red shoe near the volcano.

Max: What’s this? This shoe looks like Kirbo’s…and this is a pink Kirby costume…

But where was Kirbo? What happened?

Master8: Hey Max what’s up, wait, where’s Nudge, Osc, and Kirbo?
IlluZhion: Holy shitty titty hittin the griddy, Kirbo’s skin and red shoes are there!
Kid: Explain yourself.
Max: I promise you it’s not what it looks like.
Toad: Really? Seems to me you threw Nudge and Osc into the lava and had the audacity to remove Kirbo’s skin.
Max: I promise please…it wasn’t me at all!
Fiery: Save the talk, we know it’s you!
Max: Fiery pls-
Noob: I’m about to whip somebody’s ass.
Kid: Murder! Murder!
Popplio: I’m about to blow.
Max: Guys please I’m begging you!
IlluZhion: Tennoheika banzai!!!

And so the gang attacked Max. Max dodged all of the attacks but got too tired to deal with the rest.

Max: Please guys, it wasn’t me.
K: We’re all tired, but one of us must go…

To be continued…
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Episode 6: Friendly Fire

Betrayer: Hehehe. Goodbye!
Max: Oh shit.

Max jumped as a small pink fist was under his legs.

Max: Ugh, goddamn you Kirbo!
Kirbo: Hehe, chill bro. It’s just a joke, bro.
Max: A joke? A JOKE? YOU ALMOST PUSHED ME INTO LAVA!
Kirbo: Um…Nudge told me to do it.
Nudge: Bro tf you talking bout?
Osc: My bab-ah I mean bunny would not!
Master8: Kirbo, are you the betrayer?
Kirbo: No, I’m just a little clown.
Noob: Idk man, you almost pushed him…
Toad: Hang him! Hang him!
Kid: Ngl Kirbo, that joke was pretty funny.
Popplio: Kid shut up!!!
SSG: Guys remember, we gotta save Lely, Dark, and StarSplizz.
Max: Alright, alright. Okay, so everyone except Nudge and Osc, guard Kirbo.
Osc: Hell yea, forced interaction!!!
Nudge: Let’s have some se-
Fiery: Bro, get a room later.
Nudge: Okay, okay.
IlluZhion: Okay let’s go!

Everyone except Kirbo, Nudge, and Osc went to find Star, Dark, and Lely. But as they were walking, they heard something very loud, repeating itself three times.

???: It’s just a joke…it’s just a joke…IT’S JUST A JOKE!!!
Popplio: AGHHHHHHH, GHOST!!!
Noob: No…I think it’s a real person. But I can’t seem to figure out where it came from.
ER Mac: Me neither…but do you think that was Kirbo?
Fiery: No, it didn’t sound like Kirbo!
Master8: What do we do? We’re aimlessly walking around.
SSG: There’s an opening here, wanna go through it?
Max: I don’t know…
Toad: Man stop being so paranoid. We’ll be fine!
Dietsoda: Max is a scaredy mayfly! How pathetic. I’ll lead the way. Follow me.

Dietsoda crawled through the small opening leading the way. Everyone crawled through except for Max, who was last left.

Max: I can’t go there…the bad feeling is there again.
K: Max, come through! You pussy cat!
Max: Um…I think my knee hurts a bit. I’ll stay here and guard.
K: Okay? I’ll go now. Bye…

But of course, Max lied. He sat by the opening, thinking what was gonna happen if he went through. Meanwhile…

Nudge: Man, beating up Kirbo is fun.
Osc: Hell yeah.
Kirbo: Stop it you motherfuckers!!!
Nudge: It’S jUsT a JoKe BrO.
Kirbo: AHHHHHHHHHH.

While Kirbo is slowly dying from Nudge and Osc, the rest were through the end of the opening.

K: Max will be staying behind. He says his knee hurts.
IlluZhion: What if he’s the betrayer?
Kid: Idk anymore, let’s just go.
Noob: Guys why is there green liquid going in the lava?
Toad: Let’s go there.

They followed the green liquid to find a big laboratory. Every corner was filled with machines, from cubicles and boxes, it filled the room. There was a table in the middle with nothing but a note.

Noob: The note says, “Good luck.” What do-

Noob couldn’t finish the sentence. A loud alarm played and a cage closed the lab. The wall started spewing out acid.

Popplio: AHHH!!! Bye mom, bye dad, bye friends, bye everyone!!!
IlluZhion: Well, I’ll be flying away…
Master8: Ain’t no way man’s fr leaving us.
Fiery: All we gotta do is stop the acid from reaching us. And we need those cork plugs there!

Fiery pointed to cork plugs on top of one of the machines.

Fiery: IlluZhion, fly there and plug the acidic leaks!
IlluZhion: Okay, okay.

IlluZhion flew to the top of the cubicle and grabbed them. He carefully plugged the leaks just in time.

Dietsoda: Holy mayflies! That scared me…
ER Mac: Yup, now how do we get out?
Kid: Lemme shank this bar.
SSG: I don’t think that works…
Kid: Shank! Shank! Shank!!!!!

With some miracle, Kid somehow broke one of the bars wide enough for everyone to escape.

Toad: My butt hurts.
Master8: Aren’t you wearing underwear?
Toad: I’m wearing pants!
K: Anyways, shall we return?
TheOuchy1: Yes, I really don’t lava this place.
Noob: Stop it. Get some help.
SSG: Yeah, anyways. Let’s go see if Max is fine.

While the rest were stuck in the other side of the opening, Max was just lying down on the ground, pondering.

Max: I can’t believe I lied to my friends…man, I’m such a scaredy fox.
???: COME WITH ME, YOU SONS OF A BITCH.
Nudge: Run, sexy ball!!!
Osc: I have short legs! Do you think I can run far?! Ahhhhhh.
Max: That’s Kirbo! I must save Nudge and Osc.

Max ran at the direction of the screams for help. Once he reached to the place where Kirbo was, no one was there, except some pink costume rips and one red shoe near the volcano.

Max: What’s this? This shoe looks like Kirbo’s…and this is a pink Kirby costume…

But where was Kirbo? What happened?

Master8: Hey Max what’s up, wait, where’s Nudge, Osc, and Kirbo?
IlluZhion: Holy shitty titty hittin the griddy, Kirbo’s skin and red shoes are there!
Kid: Explain yourself.
Max: I promise you it’s not what it looks like.
Toad: Really? Seems to me you threw Nudge and Osc into the lava and had the audacity to remove Kirbo’s skin.
Max: I promise please…it wasn’t me at all!
Fiery: Save the talk, we know it’s you!
Max: Fiery pls-
Noob: I’m about to whip somebody’s ass.
Kid: Murder! Murder!
Popplio: I’m about to blow.
Max: Guys please I’m begging you!
IlluZhion: Tennoheika banzai!!!

And so the gang attacked Max. Max dodged all of the attacks but got too tired to deal with the rest.

Max: Please guys, it wasn’t me.
K: We’re all tired, but one of us must go…

To be continued…

M I S U N D E R S T A N D I N G
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This is all of us when see Max at the scene of a crime
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Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
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France
How about we kill the fucking traitor now and sell his corpse on the butchery market ? 😈
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Messages 1224 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Philippines
Lelyyyy wrote:
How about we kill the fucking traitor now and sell his corpse on the butchery market ? 😈

Oh yummy, can we ask the marinator too
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Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Also I have a strong gut feeling that this fanfic is going to turn into an excuse to bully me and Max, so I'd like to speak to the manager 💅💅
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Messages 1224 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Philippines
Lelyyyy wrote:
Also I have a strong gut feeling that this fanfic is going to turn into an excuse to bully me and Max, so I'd like to speak to the manager 💅💅

Hello, I am the manager. This fanfic is not bullying for you too
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Messages 1224 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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sorry for revive but dis my fanfic xd. I just wanna know if u want me to continue since I'm feeling a bit uninterested in this fanfic, do u want me to continue?
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