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TheAssays wrote:
Episode 1: The News releases Saturday August 15th 2026!
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It's Saturday August 15th 2026. When's the episode?
Not to be impatient or anything.

Sorry for the wait i was at the festival the whole entire day so far I just got back from home mb
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Episode 1: The News

Sebastian: No... no no no no NO! Did he vanish like the others?!?! I can’t even do anything about it! This is bad... real bad!
After hours of straight suffering, trying to reject the fact that his Dad vanished into the deep, Sebastian may have to face this himself.
“*Sigh*... I’ll just let things go for the night...”
2:41 AM
Sebastian: “I can’t sleep... I didn’t get any... what time is it anyway?” Sebastian pulls out his phone. “2:41? It’s been that long? Oh well. It’s time to get to research.”
Before Sebastian slept for the night, he realized the only way is to find him in the deep. But first things first he needs to figure out how to get into the deep.
Sebastian pulls out his phone. “Sebastian: Episode blah blah blah of nightly news... yeah that should be it.” News: “Welcome to nightly news! I’m Jacob Tommy and...”
Sebastian: “Yeah, this is definitely it.” After watching for a bit, Sebastian finally gets to the part he was looking for. “Next is a very big problem that we have been trying to figure out is people vanishing, we don’t know where is it, or what even is this place, but we do know that it’s somewhere very underground, we can’t even say it! We finally know who is causing this, but, he has not been captured. You may not believe it, but it is a unknown entity...” Sebastian: “Wait, an unknown entity?! It can’t be who I think it is... right?” The news continues. “Named Keinieo.” “Keinieo?!?! But... I shot him! He’s dead! He should be dead!”
Sebastian suddenly has a flashback.
They ran.

Light appeared ahead.

The edge.

Freedom.

They slowed as they reached it.

Keinieo: …We made it.

Sebastian didn’t respond.

Keinieo: What’s wrong?

Sebastian tightened his grip on the gun.

Sebastian: I get it now.
Keinieo: Get what?
Sebastian: Why it let us get this far.

The air shifted.

Keinieo stepped back.

Keinieo: Sebastian…?

Sebastian raised the gun.

Sebastian: One of us was supposed to become one of them.

Keinieo: …What?

Sebastian: It’s you.

Keinieo shook his head.

Keinieo: No—that’s not—

Sebastian fired.

Keinieo fell.

Silence.

Sebastian stood there, breathing hard.

Sebastian: …I made it.

He stepped past the edge.

Out.

Everything went quiet.

Too quiet.

Sebastian walked forward slowly.

No voices.

No movement.

Nothing followed him.

Behind him, the boundary stayed still.

No shapes.

No changes.

No proof.

Sebastian stopped walking.

Just for a moment.

Sebastian: …

He didn’t turn back.

Because there was nothing there.

He kept walking.

Alone.

The only one left.

The flashback ends.
Sebastian: “I know what I have to do know. Just in case...”
Sebastian grabs Jake’s gun he was hiding in his closet.
”It’s time.”
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Episode 1: The News

Sebastian: No... no no no no NO! Did he vanish like the others?!?! I can’t even do anything about it! This is bad... real bad!
After hours of straight suffering, trying to reject the fact that his Dad vanished into the deep, Sebastian may have to face this himself.
“*Sigh*... I’ll just let things go for the night...”
2:41 AM
Sebastian: “I can’t sleep... I didn’t get any... what time is it anyway?” Sebastian pulls out his phone. “2:41? It’s been that long? Oh well. It’s time to get to research.”
Before Sebastian slept for the night, he realized the only way is to find him in the deep. But first things first he needs to figure out how to get into the deep.
Sebastian pulls out his phone. “Sebastian: Episode blah blah blah of nightly news... yeah that should be it.” News: “Welcome to nightly news! I’m Jacob Tommy and...”
Sebastian: “Yeah, this is definitely it.” After watching for a bit, Sebastian finally gets to the part he was looking for. “Next is a very big problem that we have been trying to figure out is people vanishing, we don’t know where is it, or what even is this place, but we do know that it’s somewhere very underground, we can’t even say it! We finally know who is causing this, but, he has not been captured. You may not believe it, but it is a unknown entity...” Sebastian: “Wait, an unknown entity?! It can’t be who I think it is... right?” The news continues. “Named Keinieo.” “Keinieo?!?! But... I shot him! He’s dead! He should be dead!”
Sebastian suddenly has a flashback.
They ran.

Light appeared ahead.

The edge.

Freedom.

They slowed as they reached it.

Keinieo: …We made it.

Sebastian didn’t respond.

Keinieo: What’s wrong?

Sebastian tightened his grip on the gun.

Sebastian: I get it now.
Keinieo: Get what?
Sebastian: Why it let us get this far.

The air shifted.

Keinieo stepped back.

Keinieo: Sebastian…?

Sebastian raised the gun.

Sebastian: One of us was supposed to become one of them.

Keinieo: …What?

Sebastian: It’s you.

Keinieo shook his head.

Keinieo: No—that’s not—

Sebastian fired.

Keinieo fell.

Silence.

Sebastian stood there, breathing hard.

Sebastian: …I made it.

He stepped past the edge.

Out.

Everything went quiet.

Too quiet.

Sebastian walked forward slowly.

No voices.

No movement.

Nothing followed him.

Behind him, the boundary stayed still.

No shapes.

No changes.

No proof.

Sebastian stopped walking.

Just for a moment.

Sebastian: …

He didn’t turn back.

Because there was nothing there.

He kept walking.

Alone.

The only one left.

The flashback ends.
Sebastian: “I know what I have to do know. Just in case...”
Sebastian grabs Jake’s gun he was hiding in his closet.
”It’s time.”

Before I Say Anything..
Sorry For Not Being Active To Watch The Episodes 😅

Anyways... If I'm Being Completly Honest... I Absolutely LOVED The Preluge And Episode 1!
Like.. The Preluge I Liked How It Started And Sebastian's Reaction When He Realized His Dad Was Gone, Not Just That But I Actually Laughed When After Sebastian Said Something SERIOUS To His Dad In A Text Message.. The Dad Just Said "👍"

But If I Had To Choose A Favorite Between The Two It Would Be The First Episode Because Of How Sebastian Realizes That It's An Unknown Entity Named Keinieo.. And What I Absolutely Liked The Most About This Episode Is The Flaskback Because It Absolutely Fits After A Scene Like That!

But What Actually Made Me Love This Episode More It's How He Grabbed Jake's Gun He Had In The Closet! Since That's What He Used On Keinieo At The End Of A Normal Trip!


And I Actually Love A Lot How This IS A Sequel To A Normal Trip Since After You Ended That Fanfic If I'm Being Honest I Wondered How Would A Sequel Look Like.. And When There You Said You'd Make A Season 2 I Got Absolutely Excited!
I Can't Wait For The Upcoming Episodes Of This!
And Even If I Can't Wait I'll Wait Patiently Because I KNOW This Fanfic Will Be Perfect!
(I Even Edited My Message Of My Character Just To Add The Gun Even Tho I Know It Wasn't Necessary To Do That)
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Brazil
Name:Marcelo
Color:Blue
Personality:Normal
Gender:Boy
Abilities:Carry Any Video Game Weapons
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battle7144 pts ★ Racer
United States
Marcelo64 wrote:
Name:Marcelo
Color:Blue
Personality:Famous
Gender:Boy
Abilities:Carry Any Video Game Weapons

Rejected. Just edit your personality. A personality is how you act, and what traits you have. Being famous isn’t a full personality and I would never get your character right because you didn’t really include the personality.
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Next episodes won’t be until my schoolyear starts back up cuz I can write more
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vs5460 pts ★ Novice
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Brazil
Marcelo64 wrote:
Name:Marcelo
Color:Blue
Personality:Famous
Gender:Boy
Abilities:Carry Any Video Game Weapons

Rejected. Just edit your personality. A personality is how you act, and what traits you have. Being famous isn’t a full personality and I would never get your character right because you didn’t really include the personality.

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battle5038 pts ★ Novice
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/!\WARNING!/!\

Please read the following below before reading.

This fanfic contains themes not suitable for those under 10 years of age. This contains scary themes, bloodshed, acts of murder, and more. I know there are very young people on this site, so if you are 10 or under, please, do not join, contribute, or read this. Don’t even click on this topic, and those who are suitable of age, remember, this is fiction. That’s all.


Okay, so yes, I’m making a new fanfic. if you’re wondering what happened to the old one check the topic called: I’m giving up...
Anyways, the fanfic won’t be that traumatizing, it’s really not that dark. Anyways, here is what this will be about.
Sebastian suddenly woke up in a place that doesn’t look like earth at all. The place is so deep, that it can’t even be said. It turns out other people randomly ended up here too, people who did end up here are wondering how they even got here. It turns out that it’s a extremely dangerous place, and many people has died from here. People are still trying to figure where and how these people are vanishing. All the people who suddenly just got in there, (remember we don’t even know how) are missing, hundreds and hundreds of faces on poles, trees, buildings, all over the news. There may be a way to get out, and there may be a way to stop it.

Okay, that’s the fanfic, if you want to you can join.



Vast
Age 13
Male
Addicted to writing books and is cool and friendly I guess but has anger issues and scared of the dark sometimes and is usually seen hiding in bathtub or bed or anywhere that you can cover yourself in so no monsters can see you
Also plays games
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battle5000 pts ★ Novice
Brazil
Marcelo64 wrote:
Marcelo64 wrote:
Name:Marcelo
Color:Blue
Personality:Nice And Cool
Gender:Boy
Abilities:Carry Any Video Game Weapons

Rejected. Just edit your personality. A personality is how you act, and what traits you have. Being famous isn’t a full personality and I would never get your character right because you didn’t really include the personality.

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How do you expect Granola to know your definition of "normal"?

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