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Messages 438 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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This topic is about a comic book I started back when I started high school/secondary school. I'll probably never finish this because I suck at drawing, some episodes are inappropriate for kids, I don't have any wooden color pencils with me and I don't interact with my irl friend who worked with me anymore.

There were going to be 10 episodes for the first season (consisting of 1 side of a page each), but only 7/10 are done and I stopped working on the 8th episode...

Here are the episodes in order (the original names were French, so I translated them. I forgot the 1st, 2nd, 7th and 9th episodes names, so the names I gave them aren't accurate):

1: 8-bit Crossover (no dialogue, no sound effects, 2 deaths)

2: Mini-Mario Panic (no dialogue, farting)

3: Stupid Black Hole (nudity, farting, 3 deaths)

4: Mario Party, part 1/3 (nudity, dummy thicc Mario, 3 deaths, copyrighted music)

5: Mario's Pranks (nudity, blasphemy, 1 death)

6: Mario Party, part 2/3 (copyrighted music)

7: Explosive Red Goombas (cartoon gore, 4 deaths)

8: Peach the Airhead (3 deaths)

9: Eating Competition (5 deaths)

10: Mario Party, part 3/3 (a LOT of deaths)

If you want me to tell the plot of an episode (or what it could have been), tell me.
Messages 406 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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This sounds pretty interesting :O

Mind if I get Peach The Airhead’s plot?
Messages 438 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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This sounds pretty interesting :O

Mind if I get Peach The Airhead’s plot?

Sure! From what I remember, it starts with a marriage sequence between Mario and Peach. There is Luigi in the corner dreaming about Mario and Peach's future kid. Yoshi says to Peach if she wants Mario (Yoshi just says Yoshi, but there is a thought bubble that translates what he said). She accepts, but accidentally kicks Mario in the balls, waking Luigi up in the process. After that, Peach and Mario got a son (a pizza with Mario's head on it), but Luigi ate him. In the end, Mario and Peach goes on a date on top of a volcano where they both accidentally fall down into and get consumed by the lava. The volcano then erupts.
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mini Mario panic sounds like a bad time with the bad gas
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You sound like mashed (youtuber who does similar stuff to your comics)
Messages 438 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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mini Mario panic sounds like a bad time with the bad gas

I'm not sure if that's the case, so I'll tell the plot:

Mario, sweating, is building a Mini-Mario toy. Luigi slams the door open, causing the Mini-Mario to explode on Mario's face. Luigi excuses himself to the black-faced Mario. Luigi then shows a Mini-Luigi toy he made himself. Luigi notices a door and opens it against Mario's refusal. There are 5 Mini-Mario toys behind this door. Luigi then runs out of Mario's room, accidentally taking off Mario's hat in the process. Mario then noticed that his Mini-Mario toys are missing. Luigi brought the Mini-Mario toys to Peach and re-entered Mario's room to bring them back only to notice that Mario did some off-page training. Mario does a small fart because he ate a nasty mushroom. Mario then flies while farting, his clothes falling off of him in the process (we only see his bare legs)
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Mario party
all 3 parts in 1 msg!
Messages 438 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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Aven wrote:
Mario party
all 3 parts in 1 msg!

Alright! Here are the plots for each of them:

Part 1: The party takes place in a castle labeled "MARIO PARTY" Mario and Luigi are doing their dances from the NES version of Tetris. Luigi says "Thank you Mario for inviting me" and Mario replies "You're welcome Luigi". The door then opens, The plumber brothers stop dancing and Mario falls flat on the floor, butt in the air. Peach and Daisy entered the building. Peach says "we arrived" then both Peach and Daisy um...
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take their dress off, they aren't wearing bras (don't worry, there is a black censor bar on their chests)
Mario's eyes and mouth becomes large (like SMG4 Mario's mustache). Luigi does a poker face with dot eyes, a gamer tag saying Luigi No Scoper on top of him says "are you ready noob". Turn Down For What starts playing and Luigi kicks a heart-eyed Mario on his fatass. Mario accidentally knocks over Peach and Daisy during his knockback. Both Mario, Peach and Daisy explodes Smash Bros style. Luigi then dances the Gangnam style.


Part 2: Luigi is standing here, smiling while Like A Boss plays in the background. Mario, Peach and Daisy are standing each on a respawn platform. The platforms disappear and Mario falls head first on the floor, scaring Luigi in the process. Both Peach and Daisy fall slowly because they both have their dress back. Luigi tells Mario "Mario you scared me" And a dizzy, injured Mario responds "Sorry Luigi". Yoshi then enters the Mario PARTY Castle and says "Yoshi!!! (Hello everybody!!!)". Luigi then says "Hello Yoshi!!" Mario then asks "You invited Yoshi?" Luigi answers with "Yes Mario" then Mario says "OK". After that, a row of three Goombas enter the building, with the one on the top opening the door with a wrench. Mario says "Who invited those muffins" which Luigi yells "For the millionth time Mario those are Goombas!"

Part 3 (or what it could have been): There were more characters that were invited (Link, Donkey Kong, Pit, Samus, Bowser, and many more characters) There is a screen with me and my friend who work along with me for the comic book congratulating Mario for making a decent party. Then Conker arrives uninvited with a chainsaw. Conker goes on a rampage on the people who were having a party. Everyone dies, except Conker, my friend and me.
Messages 1325 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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SuperMega7 wrote:
This topic is about a comic book I started back when I started high school/secondary school. I'll probably never finish this because I suck at drawing, some episodes are inappropriate for kids, I don't have any wooden color pencils with me and I don't interact with my irl friend who worked with me anymore.

There were going to be 10 episodes for the first season (consisting of 1 side of a page each), but only 7/10 are done and I stopped working on the 8th episode...

Here are the episodes in order (the original names were French, so I translated them. I forgot the 1st, 2nd, 7th and 9th episodes names, so the names I gave them aren't accurate):

1: 8-bit Crossover (no dialogue, no sound effects, 2 deaths)

2: Mini-Mario Panic (no dialogue, farting)

3: Stupid Black Hole (nudity, farting, 3 deaths)

4: Mario Party, part 1/3 (nudity, dummy thicc Mario, 3 deaths, copyrighted music)

5: Mario's Pranks (nudity, blasphemy, 1 death)

6: Mario Party, part 2/3 (copyrighted music)

7: Explosive Red Goombas (cartoon gore, 4 deaths)

8: Peach the Airhead (3 deaths)

9: Eating Competition (5 deaths)

10: Mario Party, part 3/3 (a LOT of deaths)

If you want me to tell the plot of an episode (or what it could have been), tell me.


Those Plots sound way better than My 3 Failure Mario Comic Books.
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Messages 438 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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So I dreamed about those comics... During my dream I was checking my comic pages and there was one that I didn't even make. I remember about 2 panels of this non-existent story. One where Gold Mario cuddles with Ice Mario while sleeping and one where Gold Mario gives a Super Crown to Ice Mario.

Maybe I got this dream because I'm getting more ideas for this comic series?
Messages 984 - Mario Mario
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I tried Yoshi World (faliure) Your comic sounds pretty good!
Edit: Dream on. Continue your writing vigorously. (don't hate me for this pls)
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Messages 438 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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I feel like I could talk about the characters (those who appeared in the comics and those who haven't appeared yet) what do you guys think?

Appeared in the comics:
Mario
Luigi
Pixelated Mario (NES)
Pixelated Luigi (NES)
Mini Mario (toy)
Mini Luigi (toy)
Peach
Daisy
Yoshi
Goomba
Red Goomba

Haven't appeared in the comics yet:
Mario Jr. (pizza)
Toad
Pixelated Peach (NES)
Bowser
Donkey Kong
Link (each different version of him are here)
Samus
Pit
The Creator (me)
Conker
Wario
Waluigi
Toadette
Metal Mario
Gold Mario
Ice Mario/Icy
E. Gadd
Toadsworth
Gooigi
Bowser Jr.
Larry
Morton
Wendy
Iggy
Roy
Lemmy
Ludwig

And so much more that I don't want to name because I ran out of ideas...
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SuperMega7 wrote:
3: Stupid Black Hole (nudity, farting, 3 deaths)

9: Eating Competition (5 deaths)

how does a eating competition kill more people than a BLACK HOLE
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Messages 438 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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SuperMega7 wrote:
3: Stupid Black Hole (nudity, farting, 3 deaths)

9: Eating Competition (5 deaths)

how does a eating competition kill more people than a BLACK HOLE

Because it's a stupid one, not a normal one... And the black hole is actually someone who exploded.
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SuperMega7 wrote:
SuperMega7 wrote:
3: Stupid Black Hole (nudity, farting, 3 deaths)

9: Eating Competition (5 deaths)

how does a eating competition kill more people than a BLACK HOLE

Because it's a stupid one, not a normal one... And the black hole is actually someone who exploded.

and the eating competition?
Messages 438 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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SuperMega7 wrote:
SuperMega7 wrote:
3: Stupid Black Hole (nudity, farting, 3 deaths)

9: Eating Competition (5 deaths)

how does a eating competition kill more people than a BLACK HOLE

Because it's a stupid one, not a normal one... And the black hole is actually someone who exploded.

and the eating competition?

There were 6 contestants, but only one survived. They died from eating too much.

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