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Totally fixed super sigma
comments In Piranha Plant Pipeline on 2024-11-23 at 06:06:01
This is the United States speaking. We have noticed Oil Road and will now be setting up multiple rigs there. Do not try to interfere or you will be shot down by an F-35.
comments In Mario Kart: The Hilarious Tourney on 2024-11-23 at 05:55:03
The glitch without the walls seems to only trigger during the second and third laps
comments In Piranha Plant Pipeline on 2024-11-23 at 05:37:58
Gameplay:
Layout = 5/5
Collisions = 3/3
Variety = 3/3
Clearness = 3/3
Obstacles = 1.5/2
Length = 2/2
Difficulty = 2/2
Total for gameplay: 19.5/20

Decoration:
Visual = 3/3
Decoration = 2.25/3
Theming = 2/2
Music = 1/1
Background = 0.25/1
Total for decoration: 8.5/10

Total: 28/30

Really love this track and a great rendition. Love how the moving platforms are incorporated into the pipes! Really great track overall!
comments In Piranha Plant Pipeline on 2024-11-23 at 04:47:18
Gameplay:
Layout = 4/5
Collisions = 3/3
Variety = 2.5/3
Clearness = 3/3
Obstacles = 2/2
Length = 1/2
Difficulty = 2/2
Total for gameplay: 17.5/20

Decoration
Visual = 3/3
Decoration = 2.25/3
Theming = 2/2
Music = 1/1
Background = 0.75/1
Total for decoration: 9/10

+1 for fun and creative challenges (WHY CAN'T I WIN)

Total: 27.5/30

AVG from me and iz is 27.375/30. Fun track, slightly held back by the layout and length.
comments In Riverside Park on 2024-11-23 at 04:41:33
Overall, track is very long and the layout is kind of boring. There are no obstacles or much variety in this track.
comments In dirt devil stadium on 2024-11-21 at 15:45:24
Gameplay
Layout = 2/5
Collisions = 2/3
Variety = 1/3
Clearness = 2/3
Obstacles = 0.5/2
Length = 0.5/2
Difficulty = 1/2
Total for gameplay: 9/20

Decoration
Visual = 3/3
Decoration = 2/3
Theming = 1.5/2
Music = 0.5/1
Background = 1/1
Total for decoration: 8/10

Total: 17/30
comments In dirt devil stadium on 2024-11-21 at 15:44:22
Gameplay:
Layout = 3/5
Collisions = 1.5/3
Variety = 1/3
Clearness = 2.5/3
Obstacles = 1.5/2
Length = 1.5/2
Difficulty = 1/2
Total for gameplay: 12/20

Decoration:
Visual = 2/3
Decoration = 1/3
Theming = 0.5/2
Music = 0.5/1
Background = 1/1
Total for decoration: 5/10

Total: 17/30

AVG between me and iz is 16/30

comments In wario's trampoline park on 2024-11-20 at 18:00:49
Gameplay:
Layout = 4/5
Collisions = 2/3
Variety = 3/3
Clearness = 3/3
Obstacles = 1.5/2
Length = 1.5/2
Difficulty = 2/2
Total for gameplay: 17/20

Decoration:
Visual = 3/3
Decoration = 2/3
Theming = 2/2
Music = 0.5/1
Background = 0.5/1
Total for decoration: 8/10

Total: 25/30

AVG between me and iz is 25.75/30
comments In Lakeside Park on 2024-11-20 at 17:52:57
Gameplay
Layout = 4/5
Collisions = 3/3
Variety = 2.5/3
Clearness = 3/3
Obstacles = 1.5/2
Length = 2/2
Difficulty = 1.5/2
Total for gameplay: 17.5/20

Decoration
Visual = 2.5/3
Decoration = 2.5/3
Theming = 2/2
Music = 1/1
Background = 1/1
Total for decoration: 9/10

+0.5 for challenge!

Total: 27/30

AVG between me and iz is 28/30!

comments In Boo Bridge on 2024-11-20 at 17:48:16
Gameplay
Layout = 3/5
Collisions = 2.5/3
Variety = 1.5/3
Clearness = 2/3
Obstacles = 1.5/2
Length = 2/2
Difficulty = 1.5/2
Total for gameplay: 14/20

Decoration
Visual = 2/3
Decoration = 2/3
Theming = 1.5/2
Music = 1/1
Background = 0.5/1
Total for decoration: 7/10

Total: 21/30

Agree with iz's critiques; great first track using paint.net!

AVG between me and iz is 21.75!
comments In Florest Cave on 2024-11-20 at 17:38:43
Gameplay
Layout = 4.5/5
Collisions = 3/3
Variety = 2/3
Clearness = 3/3
Obstacles = 1.5/2
Length = 2/2
Difficulty = 2/2
Total for gameplay: 18/20

Decoration
Visual = 3/3
Decoration = 2/3
Theming = 2/2
Music = 1/1
Background = 1/1
Total for decoration: 9/10

Total: 27/30

AVG from me and iz is 27/30
comments In Scorching Lava Land on 2024-11-20 at 17:35:49
This is already looking way better than your other tracks, keep improving and your tracks can be even better!

Some criticisms: Layout is kind of simple, a bit more complexity would be better. Also, length of the track can be a bit longer.

Pixel is a good basic artstyle but can hinder the visuals. Also, some more obstacles and decor can be added (Cheep-cheeps, crabs, etc.)
comments In Guy square on 2024-11-04 at 20:00:15
Gameplay:
Layout = 3.5/5
Collisions = 3/3
Variety = 2/3
Clearness = 1/3
Obstacles = 0/2
Length = 1/2
Difficulty = 0.5/2
Total for gameplay: 11/20

Decoration:
Visual = 1.5/3
Decoration = 1.5/3
Theming = 1/2
Music = 0.5/1
Background = 0.5/1
Total for decoration: 5/10

Total: 16/30
comments In Guy square on 2024-11-04 at 19:55:59
OK track, however layout is kind of boring and not much decor or anything.

Score from me and iz is 18/30
comments In hellride on 2024-11-04 at 19:50:17
Gameplay:
Layout = 2/5
Collisions = 3/3
Variety = 1.5/3
Clearness = 3/3
Obstacles = 0.5/2
Length = 1.5/2
Difficulty = 0.5/2
Total for gameplay: 12/20

Decoration:
Visual = 1.5/3
Decoration = 0.5/3
Theming = 2/2
Music = 0.5/1
Background = 0.5/1
Total for decoration: 5/10

Total: 17/30
comments In hellride on 2024-11-04 at 19:49:37
Gameplay:
Layout = 4.5/5
Collisions = 3/3
Variety = 3/3
Clearness = 3/3
Obstacles = 2/2
Length = 2/2
Difficulty = 2/2
Total for gameplay: 20/20

Decoration:
Visual = 3/3
Decoration = 3/3
Theming = 1.75/2
Music = 1/1
Background = 1/1
Total for decoration: 10/10

+0.5 for challenges

Total: 29.75/30
comments In Toad Town on 2024-10-27 at 19:04:10
Average of me and -iz- is 20/30. Nice track overall, the visuals could be a bit better and there could be a bit more decor, but solid track overall!
comments In mario circuit on 2024-10-27 at 14:21:43
Gameplay
Layout = 3/5
Collisions = 2.5/3
Variety = 1.5/3
Clearness = 2.5/3
Obstacles = 0.5/2
Length = 2/2
Difficulty = 1/2
Total for gameplay: 13/20

Decoration
Visual = 2/3
Decoration = 2/3
Theming = 2/2
Music = 1/1
Background = 0/1
Total for decoration: 7/10

Total: 20/30
comments In mario circuit on 2024-10-27 at 14:20:43
Total between me and -iz- is 17.5/30
comments In Dirt-Road Circuit on 2024-10-26 at 06:09:28

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